mvandeloecht
mvandeloecht t1_j9k1o8d wrote
Reply to comment by sadnesslaughs in [WP] After the Christian Rapture happened to everyone's considerable shock, those left behind (and those born to them after) all had a strange, unremovable marking appear on their foreheads. It took decades to translate, but the result was horrifying; "Do not harvest, not fit for consumption." by savagekingsavage
I'm only commenting before I read the second part to say that the devil puppet show bit killed me, well done OP 😂
mvandeloecht t1_ixmvtff wrote
Reply to comment by Rupertfroggington in [WP] You're a siren who is trying to lure a shipful of sailors to their death. "Please", one of the sailors beg as he swims onto your island, almost too willingly. "Stop. You're so bad at singing." by ReadySetSantiaGO
I haven't seen you before today but consider me subbed, this was beautiful, poetic even. Maybe I'm just projecting a bit of my own dramas into it a bit but really, isn't that the mark of something well written, when you can find a bit of yourself in the words? Thank you for sharing your work with us!
mvandeloecht t1_j9k25ud wrote
Reply to comment by sadnesslaughs in [WP] After the Christian Rapture happened to everyone's considerable shock, those left behind (and those born to them after) all had a strange, unremovable marking appear on their foreheads. It took decades to translate, but the result was horrifying; "Do not harvest, not fit for consumption." by savagekingsavage
You just got a new sub OP, well done. I'd love to see you continue this tale, especially with such a charismatic Satan.