It seems like writing is truly in your dad's bones and soul, he really wants to finish his life's work.

There are two holes in your story, one, the doppelganger punched through your car window, shattering it, but later, it taps on your window again. two, your car ran out of gas miles from anywhere, but after killing your doppelganger, you drove home, how is that possible with an empty gas tank.? Unless you are the doppelganger and OP's body is the one that is dumped in the woods.

Ho, Ho, Ho. Merry Christmas.

OP, What colour is your menstrual cycle.?

Have you thought of renting a safety deposit box?

were they just a figment of your imagination or are you just a figment of ours.?

I think that you might need to get a CT scan, the blows to your head might have scrambled your brain a bit, if your sister had the downstairs room, why did you need a ladder to look in her window and why would she have needed to come downstairs from her room.?

beautifully inspirational, I hope you and your children find happiness. good luck.

That's the only way to deal with snakes.

If you defeated it once, you can do it again, stay strong.

You and the rest of your town are heroes, but try to get the town to invest in some high-powered halogen lighting and big generators. Stay safe, hope you make a speedy recovery.

A dyslexic man walked into a bra.

Don't forget the doughnuts.