stormbee3210 t1_j88ngya wrote on February 12, 2023 at 1:58 PM Reply to comment by PeterUnlustigLustig in Wedding Planner in Ukraine War Has Adapted to Curfews, Blackouts, the determination to keep on living and to be happy is so heartwarming. by TheHuanWhoKnocks Swap the second comma for a semicolon and it flows better. For a news article title, at least. Permalink Parent 3
stormbee3210 t1_j88ngya wrote
Reply to comment by PeterUnlustigLustig in Wedding Planner in Ukraine War Has Adapted to Curfews, Blackouts, the determination to keep on living and to be happy is so heartwarming. by TheHuanWhoKnocks
Swap the second comma for a semicolon and it flows better. For a news article title, at least.