vleester
vleester t1_izft8gy wrote
I like the idea but this is unpleasant to look at.
The amount of Red and Green is a bit much.
I think this is one red/green chart where being colourblind might be advantageous.
The labels being all over the place.
Labels hiding the data!
Axis repeating the title.
vleester t1_izgh59v wrote
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Good luck! Try super subtle background colour, sort out the labels, no boxes needed probs, etc. I also recommend Tufte’s book on data vis!