Submitted by Kristofmorrow t3_11nu8u3 in GetMotivated
CuntMaster16 t1_jbpdx5k wrote
Reply to comment by Kristofmorrow in After sixteen months of work, I held the first physical copy of my first book. [image] by Kristofmorrow
That actually sounds really good. Where can I buy?
Kristofmorrow OP t1_jbpf2fh wrote
“They drank to quiet their cheerless reflections of the perils of their bounty. Still Morrow suffered the burden of due celebrity for his skills in battle and the legends inspired enemy warriors of some regard to seek him on the field as their nations met to advance the violent ends they efforted to sew shut. While a young man, Still Morrow delighted in these mortal disputes but as the years aged him, he discovered his foes were of eternal youth and ignorance. And despite sharing the dress of previous champions, he saw those before him become but children, anew and scarcely corrupted by war. The old sergeant came to dread the maintenance of his myth, as he realized his survival of so many campaigns was a curse born from the gods, and his state unrivaled would end when feebleness stole his mind or vengeance rent his heart.”
rainmace t1_jbpnjmu wrote
You realize this stanza barely makes grammatical sense in the English language right?
Phlegm_Garlgles t1_jbpqm8f wrote
💀
Kristofmorrow OP t1_jbpq24l wrote
Lol of all the comments this is my fave
Cypher1388 t1_jbpthl9 wrote
Looks like someone doesn't have a voice
But yeah some of the stylistic choices in the application of Grammer are... Sus, but not illegible.
CuntMaster16 t1_jbpf66j wrote
I’m loving it
Kristofmorrow OP t1_jbpfej6 wrote
It’s kinda like that the whole time haha
Chickenheadjac t1_jbphwyu wrote
Audiobook availability?
N4TETHAGR8 t1_jbprltq wrote
that’s great to hear, CuntMaster16!
Viewing a single comment thread. View all comments