NikiTheBlob t1_jd2eyy7 wrote on March 21, 2023 at 10:45 AM

Reply to comment by 12pcMcNugget in [WP] Everyone loves the brooding Adventurer who took a liking to your village. For weeks, they have been quietly enjoying your peaceful ways and helping around. The Hero's secret is that this is only delaying the inevitable. Once they go back to advancing the Main Quest, the village will be doomed. by Daedal75

Oh dear, I'm afraid I might not be experienced nor talented enough to make an entire series on this premise. But I'm very happy you liked it so much! Thank you for reading!

12pcMcNugget t1_jd2ieez wrote on March 21, 2023 at 11:25 AM

Either way, absolutely banger! Keep on writing, wordsmith!

NikiTheBlob t1_jd2k8wa wrote on March 21, 2023 at 11:44 AM

Thank you! You're very kind. I'll definitely keep practicing! :)

12pcMcNugget t1_jd2pckt wrote on March 21, 2023 at 12:33 PM

Gotta say though, you absolutely nailed it. I've never seen the quote-en-quote game part of the prompt/story be integrated so seamlessly, or at least in such a satisfying way.

NikiTheBlob t1_jd30c42 wrote on March 21, 2023 at 2:00 PM

Ahh, thank you! I'm very grateful for your kind words. I still do know there's still a lot of work ahead of me - especially with the narration vs dialog. I know my characters "feel" younger than I'd like them to be while narrating, but I'll keep practicing and hopefully get the effect I am looking for. :) I hope to read some of your works in the future, as well! I'm sure your work is wonderful, and I wish you the best with getting better too!