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chacham2 OP t1_jd92kf9 wrote

Reply to comment by NextEstablishment856 in [WP] The Rock of Transmogrification allows you change shape into the animate or inanimate, magically retaining all of your senses. To work, part of you must be touching the rock. The best advice is to transmogrify with it inside you. Otherwise, someone might take it, leaving you transformed, forever by chacham2

Thank you.

I like the approach in your story. I'd prefer elaboration instead of a story with a surprise sacrifice, where we don't even get to see the result. To me, this is kind of an outline. A good outline though. Thank you for the story!

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Ezkiri t1_jdatefg wrote

I think it’s perfect as a short story, kept me guessing till the end maybe cuz I’m dumb lol and the reveal was succinct without need for elaboration.

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chacham2 OP t1_jdaza1h wrote

Fair enough. Vive la dif·fé·rence!

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