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chacham2 OP t1_jd4g0rr wrote

Reply to comment by TerrificTooMan in [SP] A curse placed upon you reveals to anyone what you are thinking of when you interact with them. by chacham2

I read it to my wife last night (the first post) and we both kind of lost interest. The idea and interaction was nice, blowing away clouds, and having someone that close and dear. But, in the middle we couldn't tell 100% what was going on. Also, not sure if this means anything, but when i was reading it aloud, it didn't flow 100%.

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TerrificTooMan t1_jd4vf4e wrote

Yeah, reading it back over again, I think I see what you're getting at. Thanks for taking the time to discuss this, your feedback is greatly appreciated!

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chacham2 OP t1_jd4vvlv wrote

Wow, i didn't think you'd actually like my feedback. I just wanted to show appreciation for you taking the time to write it. :)

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