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katpoker666 t1_jccd5e1 wrote

Hey Gaborrero—this was fun!

The title seemed a little off to me. I think you were referring to the idea we were thinking she was a big reporter? If so, I might have brought her status out a tiny bit more at the beginning. I wasn’t sure she was a journalist except for the theme, as everyone pretty much posts and has done for a while.

This ending line was great—perfect payoff: >>But this bombshell wasn't going to write itself, and her twenty followers relied on her to give them an unbiased perspective on cutting-edge news!

While I’m curious about what the bombshell was, I think it works without telling us. So disagree with Fye a little there, despite all of his other great points

But overall, really cool take :)

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