Submitted by cesly1987 t3_yep2bf in WritingPrompts
[deleted] t1_iu03fl2 wrote
Reply to comment by [deleted] in [WP]No one know how the zombie virus began, but humanity is on the ropes. A powerful stranger cuts through the horde one night and reaches your compound's wall with a deal. Vampires are starving. Help feed them in exchange for protection from the other undead menace. by cesly1987
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Crystal1501 t1_iu05mf4 wrote
I've heard a good rule that commas allow for a quick breath, full stops a proper breath. No human could read that sentence without needing a quick breath.
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Crystal1501 t1_iu07lee wrote
Even if that's the case, the other guy was trying to give you helpful advice and I feel you were being rude and disrespectful in return. I feel the same way as them, and your attitude was just uncalled for.
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