Submitted by veriverd t3_z7un1j in WritingPrompts
UserMaatRe t1_iy9dpv3 wrote
Reply to comment by sufrt in [WP] Your Significant Other has landed a book publishing deal! You're very proud of them, even if you don't actually enjoy their writing. One day, on a whim, you buy an actual copy in a book store. It's nothing like the pages they gave you to read. Nothing. by veriverd
What is the terrible thing that causes fear and can not be explained by mundane reasons (like someone switching the book covers)
sufrt t1_iy9f8zh wrote
Does it really have to be spelled out? It's heavily implied
UserMaatRe t1_iybvhkq wrote
Please spell it out for me here in a reply, because I genuinely don't understand what you were going for, and am trying to help.
EllipsisMark t1_iy9srtl wrote
You might need to... I don't know how to say it "Sharpen the implication?" I don't know. I didn't read it because formatting. It's just a wall of text. You need to double space your paragraphs.
Like this to make them drop lines.
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