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sufrt t1_iy9f8zh wrote

Reply to comment by UserMaatRe in [WP] Your Significant Other has landed a book publishing deal! You're very proud of them, even if you don't actually enjoy their writing. One day, on a whim, you buy an actual copy in a book store. It's nothing like the pages they gave you to read. Nothing. by veriverd

Does it really have to be spelled out? It's heavily implied

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UserMaatRe t1_iybvhkq wrote

Please spell it out for me here in a reply, because I genuinely don't understand what you were going for, and am trying to help.

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EllipsisMark t1_iy9srtl wrote

You might need to... I don't know how to say it "Sharpen the implication?" I don't know. I didn't read it because formatting. It's just a wall of text. You need to double space your paragraphs.

Like this to make them drop lines.

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