Submitted by _foolishly t3_z3ie49 in WritingPrompts
riles-s t1_ixq6hz2 wrote
Reply to comment by SpoonusBoius in [WP] A single tear falls from your eye as your grip of the world fades. The embrace of death overtakes you, and memories of loved ones wash away buried regrets. You find yourself in a black void with giant floating text: "The demo has ended. Purchase a subscription for entry into the afterlife." by _foolishly
That's a very interesting take! Coming up with that state of limbo between life and death was very clever. I like that change.
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