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ur-socks-sir t1_iwek9g3 wrote

Hey thanks for the criticism, I really do appreciate it. This was my first time writing a prompt like this, I wasn't sure what to do and by the end of it I couldn't be bothered to write something completely different. Thanks for taking your time to help me!

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Restser t1_iwf29u6 wrote

Learning this craft is not easy. There is a great deal of technique that is not obvious. A great place to learn is: https://emmadarwin.typepad.com/thisitchofwriting/

Good luck with your future stories.

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ur-socks-sir t1_iwf2h9n wrote

Hey thanks! I appreciate that you're trying to help me. Honestly I need more support, I tend to be way too hard on myself despite just starting out. I really do appreciate your help.

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