stealthcake20 t1_j0psug2 wrote
Reply to comment by WillCuddle4Food in [WP] You are a warlock who has formed a pact with a powerful demon. The times that you summon your demon are the only solace they receive from a long and brutal war that rages within their home plane. by lordhelmos
I thought the pacing was good and the dialogue felt natural. The descriptions did a good job of putting me in the room. Great job!
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