Submitted by Kitty_Fuchs t3_zvvclr in WritingPrompts
Korthalion t1_j1thgv6 wrote
Reply to comment by nomadwannabe in [WP] You died and awoke in the afterlife. It's quite nice actually. The people and atmosphere are a lot nicer than you are used to and there is no stress or pressure. When you ask what good deed got you into heaven you are informed that this is hell, followed by a visit from a very concerned demon. by Kitty_Fuchs
It's a kind of pain those of us that struggle to fit in can inflict upon ourselves. To sit somewhere 'normal' as a self-perceived outsider, and watch everybody else go about a life you can never have. I'd almost call it wistful, yet melancholy.
Enjoying coffee with a friend, perhaps going on a lunch date with someone you're getting to know, these things are very rare or simply don't happen for some people, for a variety of reasons.
I think that's what makes this story so well-written: it's open-ended as to why the protagonist feels this way, and so a greater variety of readers can connect and self-insert. For me it's Aspergers.
lsp2005 t1_j1uwrm1 wrote
Alone in a crowd of people.
nomadwannabe t1_j1u6qmy wrote
Thank you for explaining that to me; that makes sense.
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