Crystal1501 OP t1_izp1zxy wrote on December 10, 2022 at 7:48 PM

Reply to comment by WilliamSyler in [WP] You get a knock. You open the door to see your nemesis, bruised and beaten, with your child. "Just saved their life. Need to go home and rest." Your nemesis turns to leave. You grab their arm. "Hang on. I want you to tell me what happened." You drag them inside. by Crystal1501

This was tragic but beautiful... I think Paul should insist that Valor gets to look after Malory.

DragonBoss206 t1_izq3lfi wrote on December 11, 2022 at 12:21 AM

It would be pretty cool if that happened and then while they’re chilling at home a band of villains could attack her (Valor) and attempt to steal the girl again. Paul could pull up at the last second and fight them all to the death. I’m just looking for a last stand type of ending where he goes all out and takes them all down but goes down too so Valor can be a sort of God Mother to the girl.