Submitted by KatKaneki t3_10p5mjx in WritingPrompts
Thawsan t1_j6jrsbw wrote
"The first thing you'll notice is the sound." She said. "There will be none. Or rather, you'll think there's nothing. But that's only because you're still on this side of the world." She looked up at the white tile ceiling, gaining composure as she continued. "The closer you get to the other side, the clearer you will hear it. It won't get any louder, you'll just be able to make it out better as you move."
His blue eyes shined brighter than they ever had when he wasn't sick. He was staring up at her as she spoke, "What will I hear?" He asked.
"Everything." She responded. "Life is too big, too complicated for us to see how it works, but we can hear it. When the time is right." She gripped his hand even harder. "You'll hear about everything you've done in ways you've never thought of. All of the good you've accomplished, all of the lives you've affected, all of the changes you've contributed to the world."
He laughed, "Because that list is huge for somebody like me." He looked down at himself. She turned and shot him a deep gaze, not of anger or frustration, but one that a teacher might give their promising pupil.
"But it is." She said, "Every person you've ever given directions to on the street. Every bug you stepped around instead of on. Every hurting soul that you took the time to say 'hi' to in public, whether you knew they were hurting or not." He turned and returned her gaze, thinking about what she said.
She continued on, "The moments you took to play into a children's game, all of the customers you sold to, every person you played alongside in online games for no more than a few minutes, every question you asked in class that others were too afraid to." She could see his eyes as he thought about the words that left her mouth.
"Life isn't about the hit novel you succeeded or failed to publish, or the Supreme Court case you did or didn't argue. It's doesn't matter if you were a president or a famous director or a global philanthropist." Tears began to form in her eyes, "None of that is what matters in the end."
He began to tear up alongside her as she continued, "It's about the sweet 70-year old Grandmother looking after her grandchild who remembers the kind young man who assisted her with navigating a confusing website. It's about the old man who never forgot the adult stranger that played along with his medieval speaking game when he was just a toddler, a moment he thinks about when he plays with his own children. It's about the barista who you told had nice hair, which was the first compliment that had received in a long time, a moment that became a bright spot in their life they turned around."
"And you'll hear all of it, all at once." She spoke as her voice began to break, "It may seem like a lot, but it won't feel like it, not when it's happening." She gripped his hand even tighter as his own grip loosened, "In what feels like moments, you'll feel your mind expand as the universe thanks you for what you've done, for the moments and happiness you've created. It thanks you by showing you what you've done." She spoke through a tight throat and a stuffing nose, "It'll sound like a song as you pass along, the most beautiful song ever composed. A song that helps you find peace."
Tears were streaming down her face now as the time between beeps grew longer. Suddenly, he gripped her hand tightly. She looked up and met his gaze. Nothing else mattered but his eyes, his bright blue eyes that seemed to shine despite the lack of natural light. She could see nothing except the appreciation and thoughtfulness that sat just behind his gaze.
In that moment, nothing else mattered as he held her hand tight.
Then he spoke,
"I can hear it."
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Author's note: I can't believe you've done this, u/katkaneki . I don't know what's happening or where you are, but I'm thinking about you. Because of you, I've written something that I am proud of and I feel grateful for. I really hope, if this isn't just a prompt, that you find what you're looking for, whatever that is. But I also hope you understand that my life is this much better because you took the time to post the prompt. I would not have written this or felt this way unless you had taken the time to post this. Thank you.
joidea t1_j6kg1pm wrote
This is beautiful (and I had tears streaming down my face as I read it). Thank you for sharing it!
joidea t1_j6kfsfi wrote
This is beautiful (and I had tears streaming down my face as I read it). Thank you for sharing it!
Thawsan t1_j6kyvjd wrote
Thank you for reading it, I was really just writing my feelings into a story but I hope it helps OP some
Strange_guy_9546 t1_j6l815u wrote
Is there something up with me or is it normal to think about how there are different people, people who delivered more pain to this world than happiness, how they would get a different "thanking", not so beautiful
wisdombabies t1_j6kjlxo wrote
Whoa! This is just…Beautiful!
Thawsan t1_j6kyx2t wrote
Thank you, I’m truly moved that you think so
ShikakuZetsumei t1_j6komv9 wrote
Excellent writing. Good job.
Thawsan t1_j6kyyad wrote
Thank you
kjmuell2 t1_j6kqwaf wrote
Unbelievably good. You should be proud of this.
Thawsan t1_j6kyszw wrote
Thank you, I really appreciate it
Humble_BumbleB t1_j6l4f1j wrote
Holy shit.
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