NextEstablishment856 t1_j6lficp wrote on January 31, 2023 at 3:47 AM

Reply to comment by Adm_Hawthorne in [WP] The Legendary Hero is prophesy to slay the Demon Queen, on his journey he meets a mysterious woman who joined him while falling for her, when they reach the castle the mysterious woman reveal herself to be the Demon Queen Heavily Pregnant with the hero's unborn child! by [deleted]

First off, absolutely love it. I do want to point out a couple word errors though. Progeny (offspring), not prodigy (talented person), and ruse (deception), not rouse (to wake). On a different note, I really want to read more and see what happens when King Henry finds out!

Adm_Hawthorne t1_j6lfmpy wrote on January 31, 2023 at 3:48 AM

Fair enough. Let me go fix those!

Commander_Night_17 t1_j6m8fgo wrote on January 31, 2023 at 9:12 AM

The community old man has broughy us a gift!!

SamuelVimesTrained t1_j6mb75w wrote on January 31, 2023 at 9:52 AM

>I really want to read more and see what happens when King Henry finds out!

Same!

Adm_Hawthorne t1_j6muum4 wrote on January 31, 2023 at 1:34 PM

It's not going to be pretty, but Regina has magic and Nicholas has an impressive array of weaponry and battle tactics at his disposal.