Submitted by playboypink t3_10kts0d in books
I sincerely really enjoyed this book. I know the split timeline was a controversial point, as I’ve seen lots of people say they thought it was a “cop-out” due to there being almost no detectable clues throughout the book until the big twist. I personally thought it was fantastic, and because I usually am pretty spot-on with my predictions, I truly didn’t expect to be so surprised when it was revealed who was really watching Alicia all that time. Now knowing the ending, I realized the author threw out TONS of red herrings and a lot of the characters felt they had no real purpose in the story, ultimately. I feel this was an obvious ploy (in retrospect) to throw off the reader, which I can mostly appreciate.
However… there is one point in the book that I just can not figure out. In one of Alicia’s journal entries, she talks about the night she went to see Alcestis with Jean-Felix. When she’s leaving at the end of the night, he insists that she shouldn’t trust the people around her, and refuses to elaborate. Alicia assumes this is Jean-Felix’s way of manipulating her relationship with Gabriel. But as more becomes known about Jean-Felix, we find out that he ultimately cared more about her art than he did her (i.e. only visiting The Grove after she’s in a coma to retrieve her painting, the way he stored her art at the gallery, his anger towards her leaving, etc.). So my question is, WHY did he say this to her??? Was he only saying this out of his disdain towards Gabriel? Did he know Gabriel was cheating? Was he really just trying to manipulate Alicia into staying with his gallery? Was this an oops by the author, adding in a plot point that potentially fell short? I refuse to accept that he actually cared for her, so I don’t even consider that an option. The conversation is brought up once, and then never again. This really bothered me because I felt it was important to the story, and then nothing ever came from it.
So what do you guys think?
As a side note: I also wonder why Paul lied to Theo about not taking money from Alicia when he was in gambling debt, and how it was relevant to the story when literally nothing came of it. This doesn’t bother me as much as the Jean-Felix hole, but still.
llentiesambpernil t1_j5v8iqk wrote
good question but honestly i overlooked every loose end except the ones concerning the 2 main characters, because every other character was a red herring with no narrative value.
What bothered me the most about this book is how nonsensical Theo’s and Alicia’s actions are, especially after the big reveal. The plot twist did nothing for me except make me question their behavior, which in itself is a huge plot hole… Because if Theo is the one following Alicia all this time and he is the perpetrator from the night Gabriel died, then WHY THE HECK did he infiltrate her asylum and risk being outed by her?
WHY was he trying so hard to make her speak, knowing what she would say?!
The whole book is put into motion by Theo’s motivation to re-enter her life and make her talk, which makes no logical or literary sense. After he seemingly got away with it, why would he try putting himself in the spotlight again? And why didn’t Alicia tell anyone that it was him, why did she allow this psychopath to become her therapist?! And how could she possibly write all that down in her diary (moments before dying) and hide the diary in the painting? Why did she choose to expose him ONLY after she is dying, and not before he killed her and he got away with it again?
Honestly nothing makes any sense to me, this whole book is a big hole, so I wasn’t even surprised at the minor loose ends. Edit: i’m curious about your opinion or if you have any answers to this as it seems like you enjoyed the book!