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Raven_of_Blades t1_j2cbxy4 wrote

I liked it but the writing was pretty bad, especially how all Chris had to do was tell you what was going on. He keeps information from you for no reason.

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iNuclearPickle t1_j2cfwfx wrote

Yeah the writing in that aspect was horrible. How I’d fix this is have Mia do some crazy shit in the beginning while Chris is trying to kill her in the beginning then we fade in and out of consciousness as Chris is pulling us away then we wind up where we were after that. Then time Chris appears he says to Ethan a little about what happened but get cut off before he can finish. This by itself probably improves the story by a mile. Context and framing make a hell of a difference. I liked the lords a lot Ethan and Heisenberg‘s interactions were great

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M1de23 t1_j2elwgi wrote

They were trying to make him out to be the antagonist, from the marketing etc.

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