I see what you were trying to accomplish. The synths really sound clean and beautiful. The drums sounds a bit dry and lifeless, as if being played by a depressed robot.

maybe more reverb & delay on the drums, and automation to give them move movements like the synths.

this is also a long song so you could add some sounds fxs here and there that only come in once so that it doesn't sound as loopy.

check out my latest release
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BAVE7hIO10U&ab_channel=A.S