this sounds great, a complete song. I was wondering what was missing so I compared to other songs in the genre. and I think it's missing overall compression. everything sounds great but every things sounds spread out living on their own universe vs living in one universe. The drum can be bussed together and compressed together. The guitar could have more saturation/ compression to cut through. apart from that, the composition sounds great. You prob did all that already but I think it could be even more glued together.

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