You've got a nice voice and good control on your notes. I think as you progress you'll develop even more control as you hit the notes in your range well. Its very chill. My only critique is that the instrumental lacked any kind of "texture" which made everything feel simple and lack a bit of depth. Your song 'slippin' doesn't seem to have this problem. Otherwise I think you have good foundational strengths and you're going to be making some really good music if you continue. Keep at it!

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