Nice beat choice, even your flow had a kind of Nujabes feel to it. I think the doubles where kind of unnecessary tho. If you really like them, i suggest cutting up and moving them so the syllables match in time a little better, i'd also suggest lowering the volume on those. For the vocals as a whole, I suggest shaving down the low end on your eq and using a basic compressor to even out the sound so you mix in with the beat better. I like how your lyrics seemed purposeful. You should keep writing man, i'm curious how you progress. Keep at it.

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