Irrelevant to the song, but nice hair dude lol. Very 50 Cent style beat. I feel like the second verse was significantly better than the second. I know it's rap but the only thing that bothered was the lyrics where kind of all over the place. I could never catch the stream of consciousness. I'd like to hear your voice on some French Montana/swizz beats style drums. Keep at it dude!

I produce hip-hop too, so if you get a sec, here's me taking back my power from a harsh life.