The_Road_is_Calling t1_jb9nuop wrote
There is nothing more glorious than the first warm days after winter and before the bugs have come out.
Every window in the house open, basking in the freshness.
truthswillsetyoufree t1_jb9rp2r wrote
This is almost a haiku. You could try tweaking it to fit the 5-7-5 structure. It would be good poetry. Something like:
Every window in / the house open basking in / the new spring freshness
ProlapsedMasshole t1_jb9u81d wrote
The warmth has arrived
Every window is open
Basking in freshness
_drjayphd_ t1_jba4e8v wrote
Comment poetry
Has left us all giving thanks
To ProlapsedMasshole
ChickenNoodleSloop t1_jbgsnmi wrote
Brings a tear to my eye
truthswillsetyoufree t1_jb9wfxo wrote
That’s good!
False_Influence_9090 t1_jba3uln wrote
All windows open
Stuffy air is swept aside
Spring is here at last!
AMC4x4 t1_jbdez8r wrote
And that's the day my neighbor decides to gather up all the yard waste - including wet leaves - and burn it, because it's so nice out and he wants to get a jump on the yard work. Ah, the smell of damp things burning throughout the house.
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