Submitted by girl_from_the_crypt t3_10dbk6i in nosleep

Ever lost your mom or dad at the grocery store when you were a kid? That's exactly how I felt when the prematurely closing elevator doors separated me from Jacek. I was grateful that Licorice was still there at least, but that didn't do much to distract me from the fact that I was plummeting down to the deepest level of hell without my trusty tour guide. The huge spider made of human body parts beside me honestly just made it all ten times worse.

I tried to keep it together, I really did. But when the cabin came to a halt and the doors opened, revealing a group of easily a dozen people waiting to push into the elevator, I could barely contain my frustration. Claustrophobia gnawing at me, I hastily shoved my way past the small crowd, closely followed by Licorice. I had to actually fight to get out—with everyone rushing into the opposite direction of me, the simple act of exiting the cabin turned into a physical struggle. At last, I staggered out onto the street, heart pounding.

Okay. Stay where you are. Jacek's gonna find you.

I tried to calm my nerves. Licorice soothingly licked the side of my face, and I gratefully dragged a weary hand over his scraggly fur. Everything would be alright. I'd just have to stay where I was and wait for Jacek to make his way over to me. Planting my feet firmly on the ground beside the elevator, I nervously stared at the shaft. I tried not to pay too much attention to my surroundings. The painful reality of my current situation had begun to sink in: These weren't my woods. I wasn't walking among the tall, frost-painted trees, there was no snow to pleasantly crunch beneath my shoes, no winter sun smiling down at me. This was the very lowest sphere of hell, a densely populated city where everything was blazing flames and billowing smoke that swallowed the light.

And worst of all, I had no idea what to expect of this place and its inhabitants. The Leshy was scary, yes; I never knew what to make of him, either, but this was different. At home, the creatures were familiar. They terrified me, sure; they were all deadly in their own way, but I knew them. I had grown up with stories of them, with cautionary tales as well as humorous anecdotes. I was aware of how dangerous they were when at their worst, but also of how benign when at their best. Thus, I had seen the best and the worst of the Leshy, but neither of anybody in this godforsaken hole.

I felt alienated, completely helpless in the face of this foreign environment. Everything here was utterly unnatural. Nobody here was assuming a different form to hide their monstrous appearance, nobody's voice was made to sound like a birdsong or the wind.

This wasn't my world.

I spun around upon hearing the ding! of the elevator, and when Jacek stepped outside, I abandoned all thoughts of boundaries and dignity and threw myself into his arms. I didn't do it out of some romantic notion or to play the damsel in distress—I acted purely on impulse. I didn't get why at first, either. But when Jacek wordlessly leaned in to hold me, I realized that this, this was familiar, comfortable even. I soaked up the feeling of safety he exuded like a sponge. Eventually, we awkwardly untangled ourselves, each having to look away for a moment and take some deep breaths.

"You're shaking," he observed after a few seconds.

"Uh-huh," was all I could manage to say.

He snorted. "That is so… I never thought you could look this uneasy somewhere. Anywhere. Honestly, when I took you down here, I thought it wouldn't be a problem for you." To my surprise, he didn't sound reproachful or condescending. Just genuinely surprised and a tad apologetic. "You're okay, right?"

"Sure," I said quickly.

"Lord, I'm sorry, gorgeous. Well, I'm here now. I'll stay close."

It was all I could do not to ask him to hold my hand while walking.

The streets in Pride were even more crowded than what I'd seen in Wrath. People kept shoving past us, getting uncomfortably close and brushing our shoulders with no regard for personal space. The fear of being trampled to death seemed concrete and imminent. Licorice helped cut our way through the bustle, but I still flinched every time I could feel a stranger's breath on my face or another arm touching mine.

"Don't worry," Jacek said to me from the side. "They only care about themselves."

"What do you do down here anyways? Are these all sinners?"

"They were at one point. See, the boss has two main objectives for the lot of us. First, we obviously work on and encourage society's downfall, as slowly and excruciatingly as possible—that's what I do on the surface. I only come here to attend meetings and go grocery shopping and stuff. Much cheaper than up top."

"Oh yeah? What are you working on exactly?" I inquired.

He lit up. "It'd take a while to explain, I'm on several different projects, but I'd love to show you sometime!" He cleared his throat. "Once we're out of here. If you wanna see."

"I'd love to," I replied in earnest. "So what's going on down here?"

"Okay, so, the folks around us actually work and live here. They were sinners at one point, but they never overdid it. The boss doesn't employ serial killers or tyrants or what have you. Those he actually detests, because they're doing to humanity what he wants to do. Encroaching on his territory, you know. Therefore, the real scum goes in the prisons. Each of the spheres has one, and these good people here spend eternity tormenting the inmates, which is something of a punishment in itself. Oh, and of course some people also run the stores and clubs and stuff like that. But the boss presides over all."

"Oh. Huh. I guess I always thought hell would be more medieval-like, not a huge modern metropolis," I remarked.

"How so? Corporate greed, working in a dead-end job until the end of time, an unfeeling boss who ruthlessly plays favorites and never gives you a word of appreciation unless you incessantly kiss his ass…"

"So you're saying you're an ass-kisser?"

"The worst. But it's easy for me. I'm not like the rest. I willingly gave myself over to him. I didn't wait until I died. He just loves that and, seeing as it doesn't happen everyday, I get the special treatment and the nicest jobs. I often run his personal errants, too. Like an old-time gentleman's servant." He chuckled. "It's great fun, really."

"It was good you left the mill, then. You seem to truly enjoy this," I muttered pensively, feeling an unwelcome, inexplicable sting in my chest.

"Totally. Alright, we made it. Look." He pointed up a building that would have put the Trump Tower to shame. It stood out among the others due to mere lavishness. Before I had more time to admire this impressive feat of architecture, Jacek had already started dragging me into the building's spacious lobby. He went right up to the desk where an annoyed looking woman with short hair greeted him with little enthusiasm. Her mouth had been stitched shut, blood encrusting the seams. She couldn't talk properly, only pressing out short, muffled sentences.

"Hey Karen. Is the boss in?"

"Sure," she mumbled. "He's in his tv room, I'll tell him you're coming."

"Thanks, you're a doll." Jacek led me up to another, smaller elevator, lighting a cigarette as he went.

"Is smoking indoors allowed here?"

"It's strongly recommended."

This elevator ride was much more harmonious, but I was still getting more and more tense the higher we got. When the elevator finally dinged its arrival, I was shaking like a leaf. "I'm going nuts," I confessed. "Not to… make things awkward, but can you hug me again? Just for a second?"

Jacek gave me a surprised look. Then, he wordlessly turned to me, removing his cigarette from between his lips to hold it far away from me as his other arm snaked around my waist. My throat had suddenly gone bone dry. I pressed myself up against him for a mere moment until he pulled back, chuckling awkwardly and moving to step out through the opening doors.

"Relax, the boss is chill. Okay, there we go."

Jacek led me and his jumpy dog down a couple corridors before finally stopping in front of a black door. He knocked and we waited for a beat until an annoyed-sounding voice told us to come in. Jacek held the door for me and we stepped inside. It was a nice, large room with a big flatscreen mounted to the wall and a cushy gray sofa facing it. While this room was a relatively tame sight, the person—or rather creature—standing in the middle of it instantly drew a scream from my throat.

It—He—was the size of a person, but at the same time that of a bull, or a football field, or maybe a whole continent, despite being able to fit into that room. He turned to us with a smile that had too many teeth and also none at all. When he opened his mouth to speak, I stared down into a black, endless hole.

I didn't know what I was seeing. My mind was howling, trying to comprehend, trying to piece these conflicting impressions together. My thoughts were racing, my heart pounding; the longer I looked at this thing, the more everything seemed to spin out of control. I fell to my knees.

Why couldn't I understand this? Were my eyes deceiving me? Was this real? Was anything real? No, nothing was real anymore, nothing was true, nothing could be believed—

"Oh, I see we've got company."

A rich, gentle baritone cut through my frantic haze, and suddenly, I wasn't looking at something incomprehensible anymore. What was standing there in front of us wasn't a cosmic nightmare anymore. It was a man, leaning casually against the back of the couch. A normal-looking, middle-aged guy with a gray-streaked beard and an open, carefree smile. He was barefoot, only dressed in sweatpants and a T-shirt.

"Lovely. Jacek, I'll go out on a whim here and assume that this little firecracker is the infamous Fiona Novak?"

"She is. Fiona, this is… well, my boss," Jacek said.

I slowly got to my feet and walked over to the man, the Devil, reaching out to take his extended hand. It was warm and soft. "It's a pleasure to meet you. Call me Nick."

"Hi," I croaked. "It's, um, good to meet you, too."

"Sorry about before. I sometimes forget that my appearance is an acquired taste,” he said, squeezing my fingers with distinct pleasure. “So, as I am prone to understand, you’ve been brought here by Mr Hettmann to ask a favor of me.”

“Yes, Sir. Uh, I mean Nick.”

Suddenly, we were on the other side of the couch. We hadn’t moved an inch, not on our own accord, and yet, we found ourselves closer to the tv by several feet. The Devil plopped down, sighing contentedly. “Sit,” he commanded.

Jacek took a seat beside him and I followed suit, thankful for the shield my former boyfriend established between the Beast and myself. Despite not seeming put off by the unsettling nature of the other man in the slightest, he appeared to be acutely aware of my own discomfort.

“Nice try, Jacuś.'' Without having gotten up, the Devil was now sitting by my other side, uncomfortably close. “I’ll thank you not to play the knight in shining armor. Now, Miss Novak. You’re not really an advocate or follower of mine, are you?” His tone didn’t sound accusatory in the least. “What makes you think you can come in here and accost me?” he asked genially.

I squirmed uneasily, avoiding his gaze; not sure how to handle these conflicting messages. “I guess I just need help,” I stammered.

“We all do sometimes.” The man put an arm around me, pulling me close and rubbing my shoulder.

Jacek jumped to his feet, staring at his employer in shock. The Devil laughed, letting go of me and waving him off. “Cool your jets, miller. If I wanted her, I would have had her already. Look at how she’s shrinking away.” He leaned forward, tapping Jacek’s belly. “If I wanted her, I could make her like it. Her response would be quite different then.”

I couldn’t help but gag slightly in the back of my throat. I tried not to show it, tried to swallow it up—no use in antagonizing the being I was about to ask a huge favor of, as much as I would have liked to. Jacek lowered himself back down, chest heaving. The Devil regarded Jacek with unrestrained amusement. “Forgive me, son. But I simply had to know.”

“Know what?” I inquired, feeling a tad dense.

The Devil shrugged. “Unimportant. Alright, Fiona, state your case. What is it that you want me to do for you?”

“You command the Hidden People, don’t you? They pay you a toll, after all.”

“Do go on.”

“I have a plot of land. I need it to be veiled somehow, obscured by magical means. People have been trying and succeeding to access it.”

“Thought of putting up a fence?”

“Sure, but the Leshy doesn’t want that; he’d gut me. He’s a bit odd. Oh yeah, I have a Leshy on my land.”

Nick grinned. “You sure do. So, you want me to order the huldufólk to hide it?”

“Yes.”

An agonizing period of silence ensued. Then, the Devil shrugged. “Yeah, okay.”

“What? That easy?”

“Would you prefer I give you a series of inhumanely cruel tasks to complete in order to win my benevolence?”

“N-no,” I hastened to reply.

“Good. The woods shall be hidden from all except those you choose to inaugurate. Consider it done.” He gave me a cheerful smile. “You kids want a beer?”

“Gladly,” Jacek muttered. The second the word had left his lips, he and I were both holding a large can of Guinness each.

“Cheers.” The miller clinked his can against mine as I merely stared down at it in confusion.

“And there’s nothing I have to do in return?” I asked Nick. “‘Cause you made it seem that way before.”

“I did, didn’t I?” He smirked, clearly satisfied with himself. “No, no, don’t bother. Truth be told, I really like the Novak children. You’re my third-favorite.”

“How come? We haven’t met before, have we?”

“No. But let’s just say that I love the black miller very much, and he’s told me quite a bit about you.”

“Oh. Great,” I gritted out, giving Jacek a sidelong glare that made him hide his face behind the drink.

“I’ve already met your brothers, of course. That is to say, most of them.”

I nearly spat out a mouthful of beer.

“You needn’t look so surprised,” Nick remarked.

“You’ve met Marian? Is he here?” I almost cried out.

“No… The guy upstairs never lets me have any of the children. Well, most of the time, at least. He took Marian, and honestly, I’m happy he did! Little pest that he was. I came to see him when he was waiting in purgatory, and he kicked me in the shin and told me to go fuck myself, can you believe it?” He laughed quietly. “I remember it like it was yesterday. But that was before I learned more about you all. As for the one you call Casimir, I’m sure you’ll know where he’ll end up once his mortal body fails him.”

I drew in a slow breath. “I suppose I can imagine.”

“He’s a good boy. I’ll welcome him with open arms. The hunger that man displays, that unfeeling, lustful, entirely self-serving nature… Seems awfully devoted to you, though.” The Devil shrugged. “I watch him occasionally. I just love his coping mechanisms, you know. I appreciate that kind of behavior.”

“I guess you would. Cas is a pretty winning guy.”

“Definitely. And then there’s Jeremy.”

I flinched so hard some beer spilled from my can.

Nick smiled very, very sweetly. “You haven’t seen that one in a bit, have you? Do you know what became of him?”

“I never found out,” I confessed.

The Devil leaned in closer. “Want me to show you?”

“Fiona, no,” Jacek chimed in. Turning to Nick, he added, “We should go now. Thanks for your time, boss. I’ll see you on Sunday.”

“Wait! I wanna see.” It was against my own better judgment that I contradicted Jacek, but the truth of the matter was that I hadn’t seen or heard from Jem ever since he had cut contact with me and the rest of my family over a decade ago. I had tried to look him up a bunch of times but never found anything. Perhaps he’d chosen to change his name.

Jacek swallowed audibly. “It would really be better if you didn’t.”

I was kind of surprised he would know anything about my younger brother, but before I could address his concerns, Nick had produced a remote and switched on the big tv across from us. I instantly pressed my hands over my ears as incoherent screaming and agonized wails rang out. The can of beer fell to the floor, its contents flowing freely over the carpet. More disturbing yet however was the image presented to me on screen.

It was a man, not much younger than me, resembling distinctly the memories I had of Jem in our youth. He was handsome, not quite as much as Casimir but definitely appealing; or rather, he must have been at some point. As it was, though, he looked almost like a living corpse. He was wholly nude, drenched in blood that streamed out of several gashes all over his body. Under different circumstances, he’d have probably already bled to death, but he was still standing, bleeding, bleeding, bleeding…

He was in a dimly lit holding cell; in the corner a pile of what I reluctantly identified as feces, and he kept throwing himself against the bars again and again, howling like a madman. It was horrifying beyond measure. I couldn’t say a thing, merely covering my eyes helplessly until Nick turned off the tv and the noises ceased.

“Well, I reckon that was a bit distressing to see. But trust me, he’s getting what he deserves. I don’t take kindly to people who seek to topple humanity themselves. That’s my show to run.” He let go of a soft sigh. “Jeremy Novak, serial killer. Never got caught to face a human jury, and after number forty-two, I just had to intercede. So I sent someone to prematurely collect his soul for me.” He gave me a swift pet on the knee. “And I bet you can guess who.”

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S4njay t1_j4klqn2 wrote

Wow, that's some knowledge best left unknown! Also I gotta say, the devil is gonna extract his dues somehow. He doesn't look like he's revealing everything! I'm sure Daddy Jacek will pay, even if you don't.

Good thing Daddy Jacek found you, now all we need is a romantic shopping trip in hell ❤️❤️

If things are that much cheaper in Hell, this Hungry Ghost month I gotta stock up on Hell Bank notes!

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j4km2dt wrote

Okay, I gotta say, Jacek really ain't the Daddy type. But suit yourself ;)

Well, I'm just glad for the momentary solution, tbh. If the Devil comes along again later, that's a problem for future Fiona. Also, I don't really wanna know if what you can shop for in hell.

May I add that you're a crazy fast reader?

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BlackEyedBroad t1_j4kn685 wrote

I don’t think I’ve been this intrigued in a very long time!! The devil seems suspiciously chill about granting you the favour, you need to be careful. And I’m rooting super hard for you and Jacek:)

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DonkeyBackground3636 t1_j4knedg wrote

Wow this all has been extremely eye opening. I’ve always been interested in mystical beings and true gods of the world, never thought I’d actually read about a normal person not only encountering them but living with them. Out of curiosity, why does your family have to be the one to guard the woods? And what would happen if you didn’t have kids/descendants?

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ninaplays t1_j4knvpt wrote

Holy shit.

​

Are you okay? Like...I feel like the answer to that question is sort of a foregone conclusion, somebody with no soul who hangs out with devil worshippers and faces the perpetual threat of death by cryptid is probably not okay, but but there's not okay and there's not okay and I'd imagine "so my ex who I'm still rather enamored of sold my little brother's soul to the devil" is pretty close to the second kind.

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j4koxup wrote

It's the second kind. I'm severely not okay.

I need to... dissect this.... Hold on a moment.

Am I still enamored with Jacek? There's no point in denying it anymore, I think. He's only actually been here a day... Writing in parts makes that kinda difficult to convey but that's how it is. When he held me, it was exhilarating, so I guess I do still feel something for him.

He didn't sell his soul. He collected it. He did his job and he killed Jeremy. And Jeremy is a mass murderer. My little brother, who I haven't seen in ages, has killed people.

My little brother has killed people.

I think that's why I'm upset.

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No-Sympathy-630 t1_j4kpiis wrote

Loved this installment so much! Esp how it changes the typical mental image of Hell.

Oh, the followers of the Devil being unapologetically honest about the whole 'bringing humanity down' was highkey cool.

The description of the Devil was something else, and it was nice to see him NOT dressed in an all-black suit for once.

Would love to have that power of his actually, to move without moving. Life would be so much easier, hehe.

And Jacek, hon, you're not really subtle, and the Devil definitely enjoyed hugging Fiona. Heh, wonder what he just 'had to know' ;)

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sdocy503 t1_j4kpik3 wrote

Well despite the shock at the end there atleast it seems like you accomplished your goal. Got any plans for dealing with the person who made the note now? And not sure if this was asked before, since it's been a while since I've checked in on these posts, but was wondering if the person who wrote the note was one of the people you brought in to question before with Cas? Or if it's someone different?

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j4kq409 wrote

Yeah, the worshippers are pretty straightforward about their goal. But they wanna do it slowly and painfully. Basically give the world the most agonizing death imaginable. I don't know what I think about Jacek doing that but it's not my place to criticize

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sdocy503 t1_j4krskn wrote

Sounds like a plan, although I still would be careful about Tom. His note seemed pretty confident so who knows what he might have up his sleeves other than the leverage he's mentioned so far. Seems like he knows atleast a bit about the stuff that's going on and might not be too happy once this deal you've made goes through.

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bitch_is_cray_cray t1_j4ks0n5 wrote

Totally did not expect Jeremy to turn out to be a serial killer. Hope you and Jacek make it through this.

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koalajoey t1_j4ksjls wrote

Well at least the dog never left ya. Good boy. Deserves a snack.

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BellaAngelaDiTerra t1_j4ksxn6 wrote

Wow, didn’t expect the Devil to be so amiable. Good for you! I hope it’s not some kind of trick where he will ask for something in the future, tho.

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ninaplays t1_j4ktmsc wrote

I think perhaps when you get back to the surface you'd do well to take a day to just...yourself. Let yourself come to grips with it a bit. Any single thing here would be A Whole Lot all by itself, but all together? Yikes.

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UsualAlarmed1472 t1_j4ku87f wrote

Am I the only one sensing bad with Cas? He's kinda sus to me

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Writerhowell t1_j4kuzk9 wrote

Oh shit.

Okay, normally I'd pray for you, but that might actually end up being counter-productive in this case. I'm still here if you need someone to talk to, though, okay? I've got work tomorrow, but I'll make time to reply to any messages.

I'm really sorry you had to see that. Do you feel that it's better to know? You might be regretting it now, but one day you might feel relieved to have that question answered.

Anyway, I hope you get back to our world safely. And I still think you should see if you can wear wedding dresses from different cultures, in case you're able to run more easily in them, or at least have a different colour to wear.

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I_Never_Stop_Talking t1_j4kvfp8 wrote

I have been enthralled with these updates and taking a peak at everything else you’ve detailed in the meantime. I just wanted to say thank you for being awesome. You’ve written this in such great detail, been active in the comments, and it’s been beyond a treat to read, I’m so looking forward to more updates! You may have inspired me to finally share something odd that’s been happening to me as well, on this sub! Thanks, and I hope things work out.

Knowing Cas will be going to hell might hit harder once you’ve left Nick’s office. Especially, do you tell Cas/is there still time to save him? Or do you not upset him, let me continue to enjoy mortal life? That’s a touch decision.

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jmty t1_j4kwi8n wrote

Jacek still has a big boner for you. Hope you don’t get mad that he got your brother’s soul!

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j4kxoi6 wrote

That's very kind of you to offer. I'll try and cope on my own, but I'll remember the suggestion and I'll circle back to you if I do need it. Thank you very much. <3

I guess it's better this way? I would've wondered. Or maybe I would have forgotten. Dunno which I prefer.

Actually, I don't know if I'd wanna give up my dress. It might be dangerous, but I do like it. And I've gotten quite used to it.

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Sylvurphlame t1_j4l3b5f wrote

> Also, I don’t really wanna know if what you can shop for in hell.

Anything you want. And everything you’d never want. I’d assume all the markets are black markets. Keep that in mind if you ever find yourself there again.

I would think one doesn’t just meet the literal Devil once and then never again.

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I_Never_Stop_Talking t1_j4l3emn wrote

No, no, definitely not dead, I just wonder how that conversation could have gone: “Hey Cas. Talked to the Devil, he says you’re going to hell when you die.” Cas could either get upset at the info and try to change his ways (but we don’t know if that’s reversible) or, you and Jacek could reassure him that Nick was civil and perhaps he won’t suffer too much…I don’t know, it was just a random thought I had considering I’ve never (and hopefully will never…no offense!) be in that situation lol

And I definitely do mean it, your writing style is very very enjoyable to read!

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knotsbygordium t1_j4l4buf wrote

Do you trust the voices that come in the night, asking for morsels? Do you trust the ones that dwell on the lands you keep without reservation? Do you trust the upbringing your parents gave you without doubt?

Why then do you take that one's word as final or true? Remember he and his lackey stated they wish long, drawn out suffering.

So why take at face value their word on your siblings and thier fates?

Questions to ponder.

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radikal_banal t1_j4l8o7a wrote

That Pride part of hell seems to be exactly what would be my personal hell, weird dark woods at night - no prob. Crowded city with rude people with no knowledge of personal space - hell no

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lauraD1309 t1_j4l9ihq wrote

Ohhhh shit!!! Jacek!!! You should have taken his advice and not asked to see your brother.😔

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j4ljqfl wrote

Because it makes sense.

It makes sense that Casimir will someday be a demon of the Lust dimension. All the hearts he's broken, careless and self-serving as he is, have to add up to something.

Jem... I haven't seen him in so long. He could be anyone nowadays, and this, this would explain why he disappeared.

The Devil wants misery, he's been clear about that all along. But he doesn't have to cause that misery through lies. I do think he's been telling me the truth, not because he's an honest, caring guy but because he knew what it'd do to me

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j4lkwk9 wrote

Lmao. That's like morbidly funny in some way. I think I'll never have that conversation. Or at least not now or anytime soon. Like, what would Cas gain from knowing? Sure, he MIGHT change his ways. Or he'll drown in anxiety. I know my brother fairly well but it's still hard to say how he (anybody) would react to a revelation like that. I'll need to ponder that. You've really given me food for thought.

Thanks so much! You're sweet to say that

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PandaBennington t1_j4lkxi3 wrote

Oh shit now I feel bad.. never saw that coming from Jem.. I do hope you get time to share good memories to maybe explain why he may have ended up that way.

My condolences love.

Glad "Nick" gave you a helping hand but I'm afraid to see the cost.

Also cute that Jacek definitely still holds the same candle you do. You never know what's in the future.

Stay strong and kick that employees ass! 🧡

P.S. I hope you don't mind.. I put this story as a recommendation on my profile. I made it clear it wasn't my story but that it was definitely a great read! Hope it sends more people your way. 🧡🧡

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Tytticus t1_j4lled1 wrote

Oh wow, Jeremy - I can't imagine what a shock that must have been. What an awful revelation. I kind of wish, for your sake, that you'd listened to Jacek, but maybe it's better that you know. Hope you're ok, or at least as ok as can be expected, considering.

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j4llihv wrote

  1. I wonder what he figured.

  2. I'm actually a pretty great hugger! I'm little and soft, I fit well against most backs and chests... But he was being super gross about it. So ofc I didn't give him the actual, good experience. Shoulda just asked.

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No-Sympathy-630 t1_j4lm6e2 wrote

Ooo those are such cool theories! I had initially just thought something like 'oh, he can probably sense if she likes Jacek through idk non-verbal cues or smth' but now that you mention these...

  1. Very possible, esp cause of that 'unrestrained amusement' of his
  2. Jacek just found out though, so he couldn't really have told the Devil yet? What am I saying, he's the friggin Devil. Yeah, this would be really cool. But, hmm, does the Devil himself have a soul?
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chalaismyig t1_j4lnds1 wrote

I feel that the devil could sense that Fiona didn't have a soul so no need for Jacek to tell him. And the devil having a soul..hmm idk! Do angels really need souls? In the Christian mythology, the soul goes to heaven so maybe the devil is just a soul with no need for a body? That'd explain why he can freely change his form, imo

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israeltheperfect t1_j4lnhgv wrote

is it possible for Jacek to find your soul and bring it back to you?

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girl_from_the_crypt OP t1_j4lnob4 wrote

Yah, me neither :/ don't really know what to say about it. Or think about it.

Thank you though ❤️

Mhm, I trust Nick bout as far as I can throw him. But I'm expecting payback. Maybe that gives me some kinda advantage. You know, that I can brace myself?

I'm starting to think you're right. Like, that I might... not be over him or something... It's ridiculous, I know, but it's just that he's really pretty amazing. But I'm not sure he really does still like me. I'm starting to think I'd like that, though.

P.S. I don't mind at all! I think it's really sweet of you!

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knotsbygordium t1_j4ls50v wrote

Ah. You approach from the opposite view from my own. I wonder how much the lies would make you suffer. You think of how much you hurt if it is true. Either way, we dance on the razor web that Down Below has made of this situation. Please do not become entangled.

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I_Never_Stop_Talking t1_j4lts0t wrote

Hahah I really did feel a bit of dark humor when thinking of it 😂, I’m glad it wasn’t ill received! To be honest, when I said that Cas could get upset about that info, I was thinking the 100% permanent state of panic attack that I would be in. Cas seems to be quite different from me, so who knows, maybe he would take it in stride. Or perhaps now that it’s likely some time later, you could ask him hypothetically how he would take that info without raising suspicion. Obviously you know him best, but for whatever it’s worth, I do hope that things work out for you guys…even though that sounds a bit odd to say given this update. I’ll keep my fingers crossed until we see more!

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knotsbygordium t1_j4lucyw wrote

I thank you. When you have to deal with persons and things from outside the bounds, underneath, or behind the walls, you begin to be exact in your words while keeping them calm or formal. It helps keep ones voice where it belongs. A soft answer helps turn away wrath.

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IAmNotDrDavis t1_j4luflc wrote

Hmm, there's a song that mentions how the Devil likes a servant who "not only does his job but does it happily". I guess Jacek proves it's true.

I hope this meeting doesn't come back to bite you though. Nick must be working another angle somewhere.

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ISawWendiGo t1_j4m4bka wrote

Was Jem a mass murderer or serial murderer or both? With him being collected after number 42 I feel like serial best fits as mass usually implies a number of people killed at the same time, like in shootings or bombs. Either way I did not see that coming!

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lauraD1309 t1_j4m6v0z wrote

Blood is thicker than....well you know. Family ties and all. I mean who did he murder?? Did they need some killing? What was the reason for it? Did you think your brother was capable of committing murder? Jacek killed him and that didn't bother you. It was justified. Maybe your bother had good reason to. 🤷‍♀️

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spacetstacy t1_j4m98nb wrote

I'm so sorry about your brother. What a heart breaking thing to find out about family.

Now, onto Jacek. Nick said he " just had to know"...... after he put his arm around you and Jacek got upset. See... he still loves you. Now you know.

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IonOtter t1_j4m9bxw wrote

So.

Hell is exactly what we make it. And to think that this is all because Nick loved humanity and wanted us to be happy. He went to war with God because God wanted us to work for what we get.

Which is kind of ironic?

Nick wanted us to be happy, and now he works to make us miserable. He truly is the first resident of Hell, and it's exactly what he made it.

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Millie2244 t1_j4may4j wrote

Try not to be too mad at Jacek for bringing your brother to the devil as asked to. No offense, but your brother was a serial killer who has no intentions is stopping it seemed and didn’t have any thought for human life. He is honestly getting what he deserves. Though I do understand it’s hard to see family that way and the need to protect them no matter what they have done is always strong . Just remember Jacek was just doing his job and to be honest I don’t think that it’s a job he could back out of or pick and chose who he decides to follow through on when it comes to what he is told to do by the devil himself. Even if he is in love with the jobs sister so try not to hold it against him too hard. Good luck OP and don’t give up on Jacek yet I think there is a lot of unresolved feelings there and potential to make a bad ass couple who compliments each other in a lot of ways and could get a lot done! I looked forward to hearing more!

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digitydogs t1_j4mjhek wrote

Soooooo.... You asked a favor of the devil, and instead of agreeing to a payment, you let him trick you into leaving it as a favor.... Now you owe him, and it may end up costing you something you didn't even know was yours to give....

I'm talking of course about your ex.... He may work for the devil but YOU are the one he really pledged his heart and soul too.... The devil confirmed that without either of you realizing it when he "had to check" and he's a jealous "man"

Words of advice (even though I know you won't listen) do not go after your brother, and look into ways a section of land can be changed, and into what it can be changed....

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appa-ate-momo t1_j4mklzs wrote

I don't want to sound pejorative, but I'm genuinely impressed by how you managed to accurately perceive a glimpse of such a higher-order being and retain your sense of self. That shows rare fortitude.

This experience will likely aid you in two ways. First, it will likely lend a sense of relativity to beings such as the Leshy, allowing you to be less disquieted by them. Second, and perhaps more importantly: once you see something like that, you become able to more easily find it again. You may be able to detect something similar even if it's in hiding. Even if it's back on Earth.

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mastani11 t1_j4n91i7 wrote

I like what he did for you, and I'm happy you have a solution but ew. Jacek fr?

Nick may be genial at times, but the slow agonizing death of the world is what Jacek and his boss want? THE WORLD, WITH SO MANY CUTE ANIMALS AND INNOCENT BABIES IN IT? I can't. I'm team Fleshy for life.

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chhu0014 t1_j4ncp1o wrote

I would have expected everything, but definitely not that the literal Devil's name would be Nick...

Anyway, he seems to be a pretty chill guy actually, with a good taste in beer. But I wouldn't trust him no matter what, he's the boss down there for a reason.

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lexancer t1_j4nur3p wrote

Jeremy, Jeremy, Jeremy.... should have just stayed in the woods.

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Eternal_Nymph t1_j4nzq68 wrote

I really need someone to draw a picture of the spider lady made out of human parts.

I'm sorry you had to see your brother like that, Fiona. And while I really want to be, I'm not 100% sure of Jacek. Be careful. I'm interested to see how you react to finding out he killed Jeremy.

Also, THE DEVIL did you a favor. I'm definitely 100% certain you can't trust HIM. Watch yourself, please.

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GuiltyPleasures117 t1_j4o051k wrote

Your life is fascinating. You should/could write novels, from your experiences 😉

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GuiltyPleasures117 t1_j4o0ecs wrote

For you have any idea which some of your brothers victim was, he said it like you knew. I gotta reread all the posts. Love this

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ISawWendiGo t1_j4odo8p wrote

Thanks for the reply! Good luck coming back from Hell. A little advice? You need to get you some cowboy boots to wear under that wedding dress and then just go ahead and ride Jacek off into the sunset. It'd do you both some good and girl, he's got it BAD for you!

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LunaMoonGoddess777 t1_j4ohov8 wrote

As for the devil, I believe there will be a favor he will need from you in the future. In his eyes, you owe him now. The devil doesn’t do favors for free. Idc if your family is his 3rd favorite, he doesn’t do anything for anyone without getting something in return. I agree with you on the devil not being able to be trusted

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Upset-Highway-7951 t1_j4oosg8 wrote

OMG. Licorice is THAT tall/big? Tall enough to lick your face standing up! Dang.

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TheHonoredMaidens t1_j4ov85u wrote

Wow. I had a gut feeling about something untoward with Jem, but serial killer with a double digit kill count wasn’t on my bingo card.

Personally I think you’re better off knowing. It wasn’t pleasant, but it’s closure for you, you don’t have to keep wondering.

That said, there’s a lot of new questions brought out of this. Why did ol’ Scratch say your his third favorite family? He’s willing to help without strings (allegedly) attached, and he’s already more aware of your family than you are, plus this oddness with Tom. You said he’s worked for you awhile right?

It still doesn’t add up. None of it does.

Somethings nagging at me Fi. You may need to ask the Leshy, or your dear pal in the sauna… is there anyone who might benefit from seizing the land?

This alls seems to be working a bit too well and I’m wondering if maybe someone is actually hoping you’ll do some heavy lifting for them before they make their real play.

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cosmickupcake t1_j4ovjts wrote

I wonder if nick can help you with the wedding dress curse.

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mmrrbbee t1_j4pczjb wrote

Man, I thought Jem was using distance to cope. Nope.

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mmrrbbee t1_j4pd30w wrote

42, the answer to life, the universe, and everything. Literally.

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Such-Gate7273 t1_j4pg4nk wrote

Oh my god i was not expecting this how could your brother do something like this??😨😨

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nephilimdreams t1_j4pj264 wrote

I swear if you don't end up telling us that somehow you worked it out with Jacek and he regrew his heart and you found your soul and you're living in a happy throuple with the Leshy...

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Extreme-Carry2075 t1_j4pkji7 wrote

Omg I am so so so sorry for my comment on the last post! I am so so so sorry about your brother I had no clue I'm so so sorry

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No-Sympathy-630 t1_j4pp1tz wrote

Oh, well, I've just turned 18 and I've had steak once so far, so yeah, it's a rare luxury. And cheesesteaks aren't a thing where I'm at either, but I've seen them on street food shows and I know a guilty pleasure when I see one :P Oh and my dad swears by them from his time working at a restaurant, so that's there too

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DevilMan17dedZ t1_j4rsifr wrote

Daaang!!! The Shit Pit continues to deepen... Fuckin' Fuuck!!! I hope you're okay, Heiress Fiona...

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Nature_Dweller t1_j4sqst1 wrote

I have so much to say here but I will just say I am sorry for your...brother being tortured. Well, not that. I'm sorry that you had to see that. Sorry also that the miller didn't tell you. Damn. Also, I love Licorice. He's so cute!

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karmadovernater t1_j5cake3 wrote

I hope jacek isn't judged for collecting that monsters soul. All the daughters, sons, moms, dad's he's murdered. Sicko. Hope he's in that cell for eternity.

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savetheday4u t1_j60slp2 wrote

No..pleas don’t say it is Jace..he has orders beyond his own control

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