ChangeTheFocus
ChangeTheFocus t1_iyd3ekw wrote
Reply to comment by slackskellington in [WP] You are the firstborn of a man who promised to give their firstborn child over to a devil in exchange for a successful career. The problem is that he’s 23 years late, and you’re an adult about to propose to the love of your life. by GrimunTheGr8
Whoa. Yes, that sucks.
I wonder about the fallout from this. Satan or a demon was able to enter a consecrated church, presumably because it was invited ... will this have broader metaphysical consequences? I could see a sequel where it's revealed that getting into a church was Satan's main goal all along.
Great story.
ChangeTheFocus t1_iyd0cuw wrote
Reply to comment by humanpersonguy69 in [WP] Your wife has an estranged sister that you have never met. She was murdered in a cold case soon after you were married. You brush off your wife’s new strange behaviour after the murder as grief. Until you find an old family photo of your wife as a kid, you shiver as you realise… they’re twins. by AUFunmacy
I agree that fingerprints or dental records would distinguish the twins better, but I'd like to read more.
>!My guess is that the protagonist was right and that was Hannah after all.!<
ChangeTheFocus t1_iyd4lzb wrote
Reply to comment by exponentials in [WP] You are the firstborn of a man who promised to give their firstborn child over to a devil in exchange for a successful career. The problem is that he’s 23 years late, and you’re an adult about to propose to the love of your life. by GrimunTheGr8
Wait, so father and son traded places? The father went to Hell and the son stays on Earth with a good life? That ... that seems like a really solid and selfless move on the father's part.
I don't see how the son has no choice but to accept. I think I missed something.