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East_Share_9406 t1_j5wve8o wrote

Hmm, well a lot of the info gets kind of repetitive. X group gets Y dollars from Z source, motion on subject Beta introduced by Representative Alpha. Why not make some tables, and then synthesize a summary of events of the week based on that? You could easily refer to the hard data as footnotes throughout.

I’m a technical scientist, and that is how I’d represent information that is as tedious as this if I was writing a report on it for my job. As a bonus, “refer to table 1” will be very accessible for scientific-minded bostonions.

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East_Share_9406 t1_j5vqj2n wrote

This is a very detailed write up, but IMO it could be abbreviated somewhat. It’s definitely a long and tedious read.

I’d potentially either break it up by categories so that folks can easily find the information relevant to them, or if else I would separate out the information which you think would be most relevant to the average resident of boston, maybe at the beginning as a kind of “front page”, with more detailed info that youve provided here afterwards.

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