I love it so much
It’s so nice to see the balance between the 4 elements and how you can see the harmony all through the poem

I agree, however look closer at the first letter of each line haha. I also tried to keep it rhyming and struggled to keep it light

I hope it doesn’t count off topic haha but i had fun writing this :)

Whenever life felt unfair
I’d go outside for some fresh air
Normally heading to the seas
Desperately in need for the nice breeze

Waited barefoot on the shore
And let waves crash on my feet
Truly a feeling I adore
Even then, I felt defeat
Ready to end my inner war

End is near, i can feel it
As a sunflower in September
Rotting , fading ready to peel it
To use her seeds and to remember
How long you got to keep it

Fired up, and full of passion
I’m ready to become a better person
Ready to rise up after I burn
Eyes out world, it is my turn