Lmao I can't believe I can read this.

Edit: Yeah, it says "extremely useful! thanks."

Anyone can critique art.

Also, it's cartoony because the dimensions are wonky.

1. Her eyes are about twice as big as they should be, leading to the face looking very Disney/Pixar animated and cartoony.
2. Her thigh width is literally thicker than any part of her waist or torso. That is impossible and no human has a thigh that has a larger circumference than their torso.
3. Her leg length should be half or less than half of her total height. Here it is clearly way more than that, which leads to a really strange look especially with the thigh width wider than the entire torso.