archtech88

archtech88 t1_j25twai wrote

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archtech88 t1_iy66rkm wrote

I LOVE this! And thank you for adding in the info about the meaning of the bouquet AND the verse in question! Together they give a lovely vibe of "you fucked around and found out". You are amazing.

This story as well! I love it! He's JUST ruthless enough to ruin them but not SO ruthless as to kill them. Tit for tat.

Also, I love that they only decided to up his threat level, not go after him and escalate things

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archtech88 OP t1_iuay53t wrote

The feeling is mutual! Now my mind is spinning at the various interactions of precursors and species.

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<bracketed words> have been translated from Precursor

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Another Precursor: "I like two things - <gettin' high> and <pettin' my cat>"

The Same Precursor: Is holding the species equivalent of a very calm opossum

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Precursor1: "They're my <stinky boi>"

Precursor2: "They are <a skunk>. You have <a skunk>"

Precursor1: "And I love them"

Precursor3: "Is that why I <got sprayed> after I met them? I thought they just <looked weird>"

Precursor1: "They only did that because you scared them. You have to be gentle around them"

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Another Being (AB), only mildly confused: "So you're dating a star that has become sentient?"

A Human (AH), in love: "Oh they were always sentient, I just set up a translator and ... well, the magic happened. Her name is Jenny"

AB: "That's ... huh. It's different. She seems nice, though"

AH: "She's wonderful"

AB: "Well I'm happy you're both happy"

Humanity's Precursor: <is very proud>

Other Precursors: <Trying not to be horrified>

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archtech88 OP t1_iuat9p8 wrote

u/ApocalypseOwl your stories are always a delight and treasure to read! This is better than anything else I could have hoped for in a response. I cackled when I reach the first portion and felt a swell of happiness when I read the second portion. Thank you for this wonderful story

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archtech88 OP t1_itxccbi wrote

First, I love this. I love the twist. Second, is this a fix fic for your other story? Because if it is then I'm genuinely delighted, because that would be the sweetest reason to time travel

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