not_quite_graceful
not_quite_graceful t1_je2vgm4 wrote
Reply to comment by PenHistorical in [WP] You, a supervillain, are very confused as to why your superhero-nemesis is rampaging through your lair screaming something about you kidnapping their girlfriend. Meanwhile your daughter, who has come to visit you, seems very nervous and is anxious to leave your lair. by Kitty_Fuchs
This was fantastic! You’re a great writer.
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdqv5zg wrote
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I am still working on these! I just write kinda slowly.
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdoyd87 wrote
Reply to comment by f---thezodiac in [PM] Prompt Me mythology prompts! by not_quite_graceful
(I’ll do one per comment. And I’m starting with my absolute favorite that you posted, the third.)
“So. . . the god of death. . . is lovesick.”
Charon had to fight the urge to strangle this woman. Her tone was so freaking condescending, Charon (“of the infinite patience”, as his boss liked to call him) was on his last nerve.
And he didn’t even have nerves anymore!
“Lord Hades is the god of the dead, Ms. Karen, not the god of death itself,” he explained for the umpteenth time. “And yes. For half the year, Lord Hades is pinning for his lover, in Olympus.”
Karen raised an eyebrow. “And this effects me how?”
Charon of the infinite patience was about to punch a mortal woman’s soul in the face.
“It effects you,” he explained slowly, “because Lord Hades has a very short temper for people like you. People with your attitude, you self-centered cow. Now, get through the gate to Asphodel before I throw you to the depths of Tartarus myself.
“Go. Now.”
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdouy02 wrote
Reply to comment by cobra_mist in [PM] Prompt Me mythology prompts! by not_quite_graceful
What is this story? I’ve never heard it before.
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdna1bt wrote
Reply to comment by GodKingChrist in [PM] Prompt Me mythology prompts! by not_quite_graceful
“My name is Asterion. I am not a monster.”
A short pause, then,
“My name is Asterion. I am not a monster.”
Therion stilled, slowly sliding his bow off his shoulder.
“My name is- is Asterion.” The voice broke, interrupting itself with a soft sob. “I am not- I am not a monster.”
There’s someone else in here, Therion thought. He strung his bow with the ease of practiced fingers, and set an arrow to the string. He didn’t draw it, however; instead he summoned his courage.
“Asterion?” he whispered.
The labyrinth was silent. “W-who’s there?”
“My name is Therion,” he answered quietly. “Asterion is yours?”
He heard a low scraping sound, then the soft voice answered, “Yes?”
“How long have you been in here, Asterion?” Therion crept forward slowly, tightening his grip on the soft leather. “Are you alone?”
He could barely see in the blackness, but he could make out the hunched shape against the wall. It was. . . big. Very big. Bigger than a man, that was for sure.
His grip tightened. “Asterion?”
The shape shifted. Suddenly Therion had a terrible thought, one he didn’t want to voice but couldn’t help asking:
“Asterion, are you the Minotaur?”
Asterion wept, a hiccuping wail of grief and remorse and sorrow. “I-I’m a monster!” he wailed. “I’m a monster, Therion! A monster!
“My own mother thinks I’m a monster!”
Therion swallowed hard. “Asterion,” he said again, trying to ignore the frantic beating of his heart against his ribs.
“Are you scared of me, Therion? Are you scared?”
The boy was quiet for a long moment. “I. . . I don’t think so,” he answered slowly.
“It’s just- I’m so hungry, Therion, always so hungry! I can’t- I can’t control myself!” The Minotaur- no, Asterion wept louder. Therion flinched instinctively.
“I scare you, don’t I?”
Therion shook his head. “I’m not scared of you anymore. I don’t think you’ll hurt me.”
The shape moved closer to him. Therion held himself carefully still. Then he replaced the arrow in his quiver, unstrung his bow, and set it across his back again. “I don’t think you’ll hurt me,” he repeated.
“And I don’t think you want to hurt anyone else, either,” Therion continued. “I think you just want out.”
“I’ll hurt someone if I leave the labyrinth!” Asterion cried. “I- I hurt people!”
Therion’s vision sharpened slightly, and he gave a silent prayer of thanks to his mother.
Something darkened Asterion’s fur, seeping and dark. One of his horns was broken, hanging by a few sinews.
“People hurt you too,” he pointed out. “You’re bleeding.”
“I deserve it,” Asterion insisted miserably. “I hurt people.”
Therion was running out of words. How did he convince someone they didn’t deserve their suffering?
“I think the real monster is up there.” Therion pointed to the ceiling above them. “Minos.”
“He’s my father,” Asterion tried, but the words fell flat.
“What kind of father keeps his son locked up?” Therion shook his head. “I know a place. A wonderful place, I think you’d like it. You’ll be safe there. And it’s beautiful.”
He extended his hand. “Come with me,” he urged. “I’ll take you there.”
Asterion was still and silent for a long moment. Then-
“Okay.”
Therion smiled as a massive -but gentle- hand wrapped around his. “Let’s get you to your new home, Asterion.”
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdmref1 wrote
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Absolutely, I’ll write that! It might be a bit, but it’s coming!
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdmp4xj wrote
Reply to comment by Raining_Hope in [PM] Prompt Me mythology prompts! by not_quite_graceful
Thank you. I might expand on it later, if people are interested.
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdmnxt1 wrote
Reply to comment by ZachTheLitchKing in [PM] Prompt Me mythology prompts! by not_quite_graceful
“Come on, Cerbe!”
A sharp trio of loud barks answered the woman’s call, along with the pounding of heavy paws and rapid panting.
The speaker, a beautiful young woman with flowers woven into her dark hair and summery dress, turned back as a massive brown thing leaped over her head, tripped over its gigantic paws, and skidded into the ground.
She laughed as the. . . dog? What kind of dog had three heads? bounced back up and licked her face with its massive tongues. She reached up and scratched the middle head behind the ears. The left head growled at the middle, and the dog’s (dogs’?) owner gave it the same treatment. Then she pushed the other heads aside to pet the smallest, white where the others were brown with white spots. “Don’t be mean to your little brother,” she scolded the other heads, who lowered in shame, “He deserves love just as much as you do.
“Now!” She stepped back, smiling, and took off at a jog, the beast lumbering on behind her. “We have to be back home by six, all right? There’s plenty of time to go to the dog park, isn’t there?”
A trio of happy barks answered her question.
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdmk6s9 wrote
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This one might take me a bit, because I don’t know a whole lot about Anoriginal or Egyptian, but I will do it.
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdmjz7k wrote
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(Sorry for formatting, I’m on mobile. Also this had to be written twice, because. . . Reddit.)
“You want me to. . . what?”
Therion’s voice cracked, his eyes wide with fear, but the king clicked his tongue.
“Now, now, hero,” he chastised, a smirk crossing his face; it looked more like a benevolent smile to anyone who didn’t know the threat veiled behind it, but Therion’s heart pummelled his ribcage as the king he didn’t even know the name of continued, “Most men your age would kill for this kind of chance! The thrill if adventure, isn’t that what young adventurers like you live for?”
I’m not an adventurer and you know it, Therion thought, but the spear at his side made it clear what would happen if he said that. ‘For your protection,’ the king had declared, ‘so the commonfolk don’t trample you in their excitement. You’re the hero who will save them, after all!’
The nobles present had laughed at his joke, many muttering something like, “Foolish peasants”.
All but the sorrowful, golden-eyed girl, who just looked sadder with each word the king spoke. The princess, he knew, from the elegant dress and veil she wore. Bright gold, probably to complement her beautiful eyes.
Helios’ eyes, the sun’s eyes.
He tried not to think about the last woman he’d seen with such eyes. She was happy now, yes, with a loving -if drunken, but what else did he expect from his uncle?- husband, but before. . .
He did not think of Crete. He especially did not think of a cruel, greedy king named Minos, and a sad, starving beast trapped in a labyrinth.
The king he didn’t even know the name of was speaking again, so he forced himself to listen.
“. . . of course, you’ll need proper weapons. A sword, yes, and a shield-“
“My bow, milord,” he forced himself to say before he could think better of it.
The king-captor raised an eyebrow. “That twig we found you with?”
That twig was a gift from the goddess Artemis, he didn’t say. Instead, “It’s served me well for as long as I can remember.”
The king frowned, but waved a hand. “Yes, bring the young adventurer his bow,” he ordered a page, who bowed and scurried off. “Now, for your tasks!
“You must bring me the Gorgon Medusa, alive,” he began, a gleam in his blue eyes.
He’s insane. No one could do that! Therion thought, dismayed. Not even Father! Maybe not even Mother!
“One of my men had an encounter with it,” he continued, nodding towards the guard at Therion’s left, the man with the sword. “He’ll lead you to its last known location. After that, they will wait for your return.”
And make sure you don’t try to run, he didn’t have to say out loud.
“Next, you will fetch me a leprechaun’s gold,” the king declared. “From the end of Iris’ rainbow. And the leprechaun, while you’re at it.
“And finally,” he added, smiling slightly, “you’re a hunter, correct? Surely you can bring down the Golden Stag, then. Bring me these three things, and I will give you the hand of my most beautiful daughter, and half my current riches.”
Therion had to give the king a bit of credit. He was smarter than he looked. No one could bring down the Golden Stag, save Artemis herself.
Therion had to fight back a smirk of his own. Clever. But not clever enough.
“I accept your task, O Great King,” Therion declared. He accepted his bow and quiver from the page.
He looked back to the sad princess.
She looked back, sorrow filling her soulful golden eyes with tears. She didn’t want another “suitor”, another boy -because Therion was just a boy himself, he knew that, and the other “suitors” couldn’t’ve been much older than he was.
I will return, he promised her silently. I will return, and we will both be free.
For no one but the only son of Artemis and Orion truly stood a chance against these trials.
Therion forced himself not to smile.
Tricking the trickster.
not_quite_graceful OP t1_jdm4esc wrote
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Can I make it two impossible tasks?
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not_quite_graceful t1_j9qiaij wrote
Reply to comment by Laetitian in [WP] You're a magical girl. Your mother died when you young, before she could train you. Your father is trying but all he has are memories and old war stories. by reallygoodbee
No, it definitely isn’t just a kids’ series! Plenty of grown adults enjoy it, and besides, it doesn’t matter if it’s a kids’ series if too enjoy it.
not_quite_graceful t1_j9ld6ta wrote
Reply to comment by AutoModerator in [WP] You feel as if everyday you’re plainly existing. You’re young but feel mentally exhausted and even your peers see you as nothing more than an accessory in the room. You decide that night you either will end the exhaustion or finally be more than just an accessory in the room. by Chai-khana
Are you okay, OP?
not_quite_graceful t1_j2dnbvd wrote
Reply to comment by Smart-A22 in [WP] A young and talented wizard has suddenly lost his ability to use magic. While he panics his master just tells him to calm down and think about this question for a while: "What is magic?" As the young man ponders this question his eyes widen as a sudden realization comes to him. by Smart-A22
Why thank you! I loved your prompt, and I’m glad you enjoyed my little short.
not_quite_graceful t1_j27cr9q wrote
Reply to [WP] A young and talented wizard has suddenly lost his ability to use magic. While he panics his master just tells him to calm down and think about this question for a while: "What is magic?" As the young man ponders this question his eyes widen as a sudden realization comes to him. by Smart-A22
What is magic?
Staring at the thatched roof of his bedchamber, Norin pondered his master's words.
What.
Is.
Magic?
Then it hit him with the force of an earthquake. And Norin smiled.
I can't wait to tell Master that.
Osao almost dropped his tea when Norin barrelled into the garden, panting and out of breath. The sun was barely up, and he chuckled at the excitement written on his apprentice's face.
"Master! I know it!"
"Know that I gave you the day off?" Osao teased. Norin, always serious, straightened up and nodded.
"Apologies for interrupting, Master, but I know the answer to your riddle."
The mage chuckled again and raised the cup to his lips. "It wasn't quite a riddle, my young apprentice, but continue. You know what magic is?"
"I believe so, Master."
For a moment, all was silent, except the chirping of the earliest birds. Osao raised an eyebrow with a cheeky smile. "Is that your answer? Well, I'm afraid you aren't-"
"Magic is belief!" he blurted out. Osao's smile grew wider. "Is it? Is magic belief?"
"What makes you think that?"
Norin visibly drooped. "So. . . it isn't?"
"Now, I didn't say that." The mage set his cup back down on the tray. "But why do you think that? What makes magic belief?"
"Well. . ." Norin scratched the back of his neck nervously; Osao noted that he was still in his pajamas. Eager today, aren't we? "Well, Master. . . I stopped. . . I stopped believing I could do it," he admitted, hanging his head in shame. "I stopped believing I could make the fire listen. I stopped believing the water would change direction. I stopped believing the earth would open up for me. And it didn't."
Osao smiled warmly. "So you've learned the lesson."
Norin looked up, confusion written across his tired-looking face. When was the last time you got a full night's sleep.
"It took me many years to realize that I could only do magic if I believed I could," he continued. "Many long, painful years. I could make the air to move around me, and I got so good at it that I could fly like a bird! But then. . . then I fell. Fell right out of the sky!
"I broke my leg, but most of all, I broke my pride and my trust in myself. I kept thinking 'Why then? What did I do wrong right then?' My master gave me a riddle, when I asked him why. What gives power and takes it, makes right and makes wrong?"
Norin's expression only grew more confused. Osao gestured to the other chair, and his apprentice sat without complaint.
"At first, I answer that magic did. Magic gives power and takes it, and it makes right the wrongs and wrong the rights. See?"
He nodded.
"But my master told me "Keep trying, apprentice. That's not it."
"So I did. I guess all kinds of things! truth, hope, love. . . then, finally, I guessed belief. And you know what my master did?"
Norin shook his head.
"He looked me dead in the eye and said: 'That's what you're missing, my young apprentice. You're missing your belief.'"
"Is that what I'm missing, master?"
Osao nodded. "Magic is belief, Norin. If you believe you can, then you can. If you don't, you won't. It's as simple as that. But you have to really, truly believe it. You can't just say "I believe this flood will go the other way!" and it will. You have to truly believe you can make it. That's where most people falter. They don't believe in themselves. That's just as important as anything else you've learned.
"Now!" Osao stood up. "I believe we have some confidence building to do!"
Norin smiled, and nodded.
(Apologies for any errors or incoherency! It's eleven at night where I am and I'm tired.)
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not_quite_graceful t1_iufjws2 wrote
Reply to comment by Cringehipster in [WP] "First of all calling me a "filthy troll" is very hurtful, and second of all I put all the labor and expense to build and maintain this bridge on my own, so I think it's quite reasonable to charge a toll unless you want to forge the river yourself!" by RoboJoe9000
I might know what it’s missing. Narration, perhaps? That’s just my thought, though.
not_quite_graceful t1_je31e3f wrote
Reply to comment by PenHistorical in [WP] You, a supervillain, are very confused as to why your superhero-nemesis is rampaging through your lair screaming something about you kidnapping their girlfriend. Meanwhile your daughter, who has come to visit you, seems very nervous and is anxious to leave your lair. by Kitty_Fuchs
You’re welcome!