Hey Tubman,

Hey now, I wasn't prepared for this! You can't spring a masterpiece like this on us right when we least expect it. The feelings, dude. Think about the feelings.

But okay, seriously now. I really loved the perspective of this story. Like you're talking to the reader here. I loved the metaphor of the book. And how you've managed to include both the briefness of life, yet the sheer beauty of it too.

And of course, I really loved the delivery story too.

The only bit of crit I do have is in regards to making a certain detail more believable. But if this is a true story, that doesn't really matter.

Good Words!