Submitted by Daedal75 t3_11woto4 in WritingPrompts
NikiTheBlob t1_jd019ao wrote
An adventurer has been staying at our village for the past few weeks.
It was nothing new. Our settlement was a relatively safe area on the border with the Demon Lord's domain. A lot of travelers stopped by here on their way to try their luck against the demons. We provided shelter and food for them to prepare or recover, and in return, we earned money to keep ourselves alive. It was a good deal all around.
I usually didn't pay attention to the newcomers - they barely ever stayed long enough to bother knowing their name. This one differed from the rest. I see him every morning as I go to the fields, and every evening when I return home. For the better part of the past month, seeing the adventurer sitting on the log, gazing at the village, has become my standard routine.
Every day that passed, I considered stopping by next to him, just to figure him out. I have dismissed that idea. Until now.
"What you up to, boy?"
I had approached him from behind. He didn't even flinch.
"Good evening to you too, Ed." He said. His eyes never left the village before him.
"Ya know my name." I said. "Seems unfair, when I dunno yours."
"I know everyone's name. And their families. What they do, what they dream of..."
"Tha's blasphemy, boy. Ya sayin' you a god or summin'."
I saw a hint of a smile on his usually brooding face.
"You could say that about me, I suppose." He said. "At this point... I just as may well be."
"I'm warning ya. Tha's a one way ticket to the depths for ya."
"...Yeah, I know. Next you'll also tell me to get going or get back, or to stop filling my head with useless ideas and go earn my living."
I eyed him curiously. That's exactly what was on my mind.
I looked towards the sun, now just a sliver of it visible over the horizon. It's last rays of the day bathed the village in the warmest shade of gold I knew. The local church bells had just started ringing, signalling the end of the day. The daily prayer was about to begin. This moment of the day winding down, everyone slowly finishing up their work and preparing for a peaceful evening, was probably my favorite part of the routine. This moment right here, was proof that all was well. All was good.
"This is your favorite moment, isn't it?" The adventurer said. "It's grown on me, too."
I looked back to the adventurer. He was back to his brooding self. Despite what he said, there was a sorrowful look to him as he watched the people winding down.
I decided to sit down next to him.
"Ya sure know a lot." I said. "Ya possessed or summin'? Or a demon?"
"...Just someone observant with a lot of time on their hands." He replied.
We were quiet for a moment. I didn't really know what I was doing there. But I felt like I had to say something to him. And I was just about to when he stopped me.
"This is one of the smartest games I've ever played." He said. "I mean, sure, AI has come a long way, but still... You are the reason I discovered the NPCs here can actually go outside their usual responses."
Now he was starting to talk in complete gibberish. But before I could intervene and suggest going to the priest, he still continued on, not letting me say a word.
"The first two playthroughs I just barrelled through. There's just so much to do in your world. Then I started slowing down, and before I realized, I started taking longer and longer stops, right here in this village. Sort of silly, really. It's just the introductory chapter. But then, when that happens..."
"When wha' happens?" I finally interjected. The adventurer half-smiled again.
"Sorry, I won't say it. Just saying it outloud will trigger it - I did say this game was smart, didn't I?"
He sighed. I was even further inclined to get him exorcised.
"Too smart, for my liking." He muttered. "The first time that I sat down here and just enjoyed this, you broke out of your routine to come talk to me. To motivate me, push me to go forward. It worked - and then I regretted it. So I came back, but ignored you. Apparently ignoring you is a trigger to that as well - just to continue the suffering of players like me, who just want to enjoy this."
"So instead of ignoring you, next time I talked to you, but just didn't listen. That was also a trigger. So after that... I tried avoiding you. But you kept finding ways to come and talk to me despite it. That was the moment I realized just how smart this game was. I ended up both hating and loving the devs for it. A sort of bittersweet moment."
I stopped trying to understand. Instead, I was now praying in my mind to the gods. I needed their protection in case I also got possessed.
"So, tell me, Ed," The adventurer now turned to face me. "What would you do in my position? What words of wisdom do you have for me this time? How will you try to help me now?"
I stopped my prayers half-way when I saw his face fully turned towards me. There was a lot of pain in his eyes. Pain, fondness, sadness... It reminded me of the look people would give the dying elderly. A look filled with love to have known the person - and equal pain to see them go.
What I couldn't fathom was how someone very clearly possessed was making such a face at me. But I also knew there was a choice I needed to make. And I knew exactly what I needed to say.
"Look, boy." I said. "How 'bout you 'n' I go for a walk, eh?"
"...I'm sorry?" He sounded incredulous now.
"Jus' down this hill, to the Church... Father Paul's probably done with the daily prayer, by now..."
"Wait, no, I think you-"
"It alrigh', son." I said firmly, placing a hand on his shoulder. "We all get lost now 'n' again... No shame there. I promise ya - I'll help set ya straigh', you hear? There'll be hope for you yet when Father Paul's done wit ya."
"No, I - What?!"
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HIDDEN ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED "I hear Jerusalem bells a-ringing..."
Convince Farmer Ed you are unfit to continue your journey.
HIDDEN QUEST UNLOCKED "Benevolence of the Heavens"
Seek council with Father Paul.
HIDDEN CLASS ADDED TO CLASS LIST "Saint"
Class will be unlocked after the completion of the Hidden Quest "Benevolence of the Heavens" and will be available at the Character Creation Menu.
Single-Bus-681 t1_jd0f5kz wrote
I want an actual book like this, I love it!
NikiTheBlob t1_jd1v7k8 wrote
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Daedal75 OP t1_jd0rcof wrote
Loved this angle !
NikiTheBlob t1_jd1v9wx wrote
Thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed it :) and Thank you for the prompt, it was very fun to work with!
Looxond t1_jd1jp8s wrote
I love how the villager grasped the idea of the player being a god/spirit/demon/lost soul possessing the hero
NikiTheBlob t1_jd1ve6z wrote
Haha, I thought that may bring the most fun in this situation, I'm glad I managed to achieve it. Thank you for reading!
jerry855202 t1_jd1bf92 wrote
Okay now I'm hooked, this tickles my Isekai itch so much.
NikiTheBlob t1_jd1viv0 wrote
An Isekai with this premise does sound interesting! Thank you for reading!
12pcMcNugget t1_jd2dyuu wrote
Fuckin- MOAR, PLEASE! Genuinely, this would be an amazing series!
NikiTheBlob t1_jd2eyy7 wrote
Oh dear, I'm afraid I might not be experienced nor talented enough to make an entire series on this premise. But I'm very happy you liked it so much! Thank you for reading!
12pcMcNugget t1_jd2ieez wrote
Either way, absolutely banger! Keep on writing, wordsmith!
NikiTheBlob t1_jd2k8wa wrote
Thank you! You're very kind. I'll definitely keep practicing! :)
12pcMcNugget t1_jd2pckt wrote
Gotta say though, you absolutely nailed it. I've never seen the quote-en-quote game part of the prompt/story be integrated so seamlessly, or at least in such a satisfying way.
NikiTheBlob t1_jd30c42 wrote
Ahh, thank you! I'm very grateful for your kind words. I still do know there's still a lot of work ahead of me - especially with the narration vs dialog. I know my characters "feel" younger than I'd like them to be while narrating, but I'll keep practicing and hopefully get the effect I am looking for. :) I hope to read some of your works in the future, as well! I'm sure your work is wonderful, and I wish you the best with getting better too!
shadowylurking t1_jd387m7 wrote
did not expect this angle! Those Devs are next level
NikiTheBlob t1_jd9o9t9 wrote
Oh yes. If only they existed... :') such a game would be a gem of a find
Gaelhelemar t1_jd3ghpr wrote
And the player’s going “oh not again”.
NikiTheBlob t1_jd9oc45 wrote
Haha, perhaps so!
Useless_homosapien t1_jd7j30k wrote
I see that Viva La Vida line
NikiTheBlob t1_jd9oig9 wrote
Ahh, yay!! I was hoping someone would notice :)
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