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ZachTheLitchKing t1_jc6h8tj wrote

Hi Blu!

Excellent suggestion; I flipped that structure around like you recommended :) I'm definitely going to start re-reading after significant edits/cuts (that word limit is a cruel mistress xD) It reads much better now IMO.

I'm so glad that you're enjoying Bea showing up ^u^ Expect tons more of her :P

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Blu_Spirit t1_jc892cl wrote

Glad I was able to help! Keep up the good work.

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