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LivelyFox3737 t1_jc9061j wrote

Thanks, Fye! Yet again your astute eye has picked up on some very important bits and bobs.
The Boss and John are actually one and the same, hence the use of piggy eyes twice which I thought would make this evident, but apparently not. Thank goodness you're here to help point these things out.
NYTB!

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FyeNite t1_jca5p8s wrote

I see! Lol, that's way simpler. I was thinking you were trying to imply this was a father-son thing. Lol, trust me to overcomplicate things. But glad you found the feedback helpful!

NYTB!

Good Words!

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LivelyFox3737 t1_jcclaw5 wrote

I always find your feedback very helpful! There's a real skill in giving good feedback and crit...I just don't have it, hopefully, I'll improve and learn from people like you as time goes on. It means so much to us scribblers of words.

No, you didn't overcomplicate, the wonderful Kat also got confused thinking there were perhaps 2 characters. Of course you didn't because YTB.

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FyeNite t1_jcdczxe wrote

Aww, thank you! And I guess, that's how I feel about you and your guys' writing. Seriously, you blow me away with what you come up with every week. It's amazing and a pleasure to read. And an honour to give feedback too.

And glad to hear my confusion wasn't limited to me, haha.

YTB

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