Submitted by alacz t3_zbnkl2 in WritingPrompts
PM_ME_SMALL__TIDDIES t1_iyszsln wrote
Reply to comment by photoshopper42 in [WP] After eons of refining your work, you summon the genie one last time. "Finally want to use your third wish? I thought the last two has taught you a lesson." You remain silent, and give him a dictionary-thick contract that cast the genie an unavoidable sufferings for eons, and inevitable death. by alacz
I dont know if thats the idea you intended but... Its funny how the genie still ruined the guys life anyways with the last wish, as he will never do anything other than stay here watching him suffer. If it was intended, absolutely genius writing.
photoshopper42 t1_iyt1pxa wrote
There was a sprinkle of that in there, I'm glad you caught it :)
Thank you for the kind words!
RectangularAnus t1_iytd0ff wrote
I feel like he inflicted that last bit on himself and that makes it so much better. Mutual destruction - the genie brought him to the edge and he jumped over taking the genie too - but they don't have the mercy of a hitting the bottom.
Average64 t1_iyx4e51 wrote
But if the guy is immoirtal won't he outlive the genie?
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