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atomicitalian t1_jabr3pj wrote

I mean this isn't really a plot. I guess it could be a good inciting incident but you'd need to probably give us more of the story before we can give any solid feedback regarding it's quality.

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Safe-Raspberry-343 t1_jabr7b6 wrote

I just wanted to give an attention grabber. I don't want to spoil the ideas I have for anything further or the ending I have plans for.

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pseudobookish t1_jabqt40 wrote

First few episodes of steins gate xd

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cheerylifelover123 t1_jabvnfp wrote

Not necessarily with the window part, but try reading "The Traveller by John Twelve Hawks" It's a series of 3 books. Mind you that book is like 15-20 years old, but it's about a guy living off grid for pretty much that reason.

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Anarchyok t1_jac378q wrote

If u don't know of it then for all intents and purposes it doesn't. There can always be different versions of something similar even if it does.

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books-ModTeam t1_jaccdvv wrote

Hi there! This sub is for discussion around published literature and industry news. Your post would be more suitable to an r/writing related community which are dedicated to these sorts of topics. Thank you!

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