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BeaconXDR t1_j3mw7jq wrote

Thanks for posting this as I'm working in a basement by myself all day.

Edit: Also, strong Peeking Wife story vibes

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Theolaa t1_j3ndjbn wrote

Jesus Christ that was terrifying

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BeaconXDR t1_j3nep9v wrote

Yep. I was not happy that day afterwards haha

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FBOM0101 t1_j3nnvqa wrote

Totally didn’t just check my bedroom and bathroom closets or anything /s

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[deleted] t1_j3rslpy wrote

I’d watch that story if it was made into a movie.

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BeaconXDR t1_j3t6azn wrote

I believe the writer is talking to producers.

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[deleted] t1_j3t7a8y wrote

I think it has real potential, the douchebag brother, the wife that appears normal to everyone so they think the guys crazy.

Clearly needs a bit more development but man, solid read. I hope they don’t make the wife into some overly unbelievable CGI character for the crawling on the floor and facial expressions.

I liked how you couldn’t tel if the wife was just playing along with him when he initially asked why she was doing that etc.

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BeaconXDR t1_j3t8i57 wrote

I'd imagine there's more to it that probably the mother character could fill in.

I read it like she knows about something about what is going on, and she doesn't want to talk about it with the husband. I could just never tell for sure if I was right or why she wouldn't want to help

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[deleted] t1_j3t9szo wrote

Oh yeah mother dearest could weigh in very nicely here!

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Oingo_2 t1_j3oe58a wrote

Jesus is our father, don't say that

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murderhalfchub t1_j3p4y6e wrote

Jesus christ is a bitch

Oh we aren't just sharing personal opinions?

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whereyouatdesmondo t1_j3o9w3t wrote

JFC read that story last year and it really stuck in my head.

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BeaconXDR t1_j3oay4b wrote

Yea, that and the Pancake Family are the only two that have really stuck with me

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whereyouatdesmondo t1_j3oh049 wrote

Now I have to find that one so I can have more nightmares.

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BeaconXDR t1_j3oi6ak wrote

I got you

This is decidedly more of the "fucked up" variety than spooky spooky

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Maliagirl1314 t1_j3ohguv wrote

I knew this reminded me of something.... ;)

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hard_cot t1_j3pl9iv wrote

Just read it, whiles laying in bed with my sleeping wife. I’m scared shitless. :o

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BeaconXDR t1_j3px2wb wrote

Oh hey!

I love this story so much!

I just saw it was used on that podcast, I downloaded it and will be listening to it tomorrow

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Maliagirl1314 t1_j3s1zi5 wrote

I'm so glad you liked it. That's always so cool to hear, still so surprising, but cool. 🤣

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pardybill t1_j3psze6 wrote

Fucking hell dude. That was a rabbit hole of horror.

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BeaconXDR t1_j3pt3a1 wrote

I shared another one in the thread as well if you want a double feature

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pardybill t1_j3pu0sk wrote

I keep fucking looking up at my bedroom door reading this. Straight up

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BeaconXDR t1_j3pvwkw wrote

🤣

I just saw that a podcast did a narration of the story.

Disturbed: True Horror 2022 Halloween special

I'll be doing that tomorrow

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xnixnox t1_j3q28fv wrote

holy shit, why the fuck did i read the whole thing

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cultsareus t1_j3pjdqy wrote

Yes, thanks a lot. Now I'm going to have to sleep with the light on tonight.

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Polskers t1_j3q6io7 wrote

Oh my God, that was one of the scariest things I've ever read. Thanks for linking it!

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BeaconXDR t1_j3qi2ht wrote

No doubt! I later noticed that the writer posted under this comment as well!

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