FamousButNotReally
FamousButNotReally t1_j6290x8 wrote
Reply to comment by [deleted] in City Council Summary by Fearless-Knee2008
I disagree with his disagreement. I think the suggested format condenses the information and makes it easier to understand by cutting out the repetition. Plus, consider that reaching a far larger audience and informing them about city government (even if its in slightly less detail) is better than fully informing much less people.
FamousButNotReally t1_j0j3uak wrote
Reply to comment by NoeTellusom in Texas man charged for threatening Boston doctor who provides care to transgender patients by cryptnificent
Thanks for the insight, I've never been out of Mass so I wouldn't know, interesting to hear! Surprised about Pennsylvania though, what makes them the exception?
FamousButNotReally t1_j0ilxka wrote
Reply to comment by cryptnificent in Texas man charged for threatening Boston doctor who provides care to transgender patients by cryptnificent
As conservatives love telling us, "if you don't like it, leave."
FamousButNotReally t1_j0ikkl3 wrote
Reply to comment by NoeTellusom in Texas man charged for threatening Boston doctor who provides care to transgender patients by cryptnificent
THIS. The north subsidizes the south. We are consistently net tax givers.
FamousButNotReally t1_iy97wqf wrote
Reply to comment by Front_World205 in [WP] Your Significant Other has landed a book publishing deal! You're very proud of them, even if you don't actually enjoy their writing. One day, on a whim, you buy an actual copy in a book store. It's nothing like the pages they gave you to read. Nothing. by veriverd
Interesting concept! There's a couple grammar issues like was -> were for plural but it was enjoyable
FamousButNotReally t1_iy8e6lg wrote
Reply to comment by JoshSidekick in what is this plane doing? by baron_muchhumpin
Did you have to throw darts to choose? I got one of these and I couldn't aim for shit
FamousButNotReally t1_itv4a6j wrote
Reply to comment by Rupertfroggington in [WP] All your life, mythological beings have tried to pick you up. Childhood? Forced adoption. Teenagehood/Adulthood? Marriage. For example, selkies purposefully left their skins where you'd find them; banshees serenade you outside every night. Now at 30, you've learned why you attract them all... by MidgardWyrm
I enjoyed the ending and then you threw the cliffhanger curveball and you triggered my itch for more.
Love it!
FamousButNotReally t1_j63u8vc wrote
Reply to comment by ProofIllustrious327 in City Council Summary by Fearless-Knee2008
I read it. I know how long it takes. It's not that much of a read. I'm not saying it should be a TikTok grab your attention in 6 seconds and sell you a product format. But there is a better way to present the data without it being repetitive and artificially long.
Condensing something to make it easier to parse doesn't make the reader stupid, inattentive or make the text ineffective.
Rather than saying X paid Y for Z to happen like for line, tabulate it. Im not suggesting this to "pander" to the quick media consumption we have today but to make it more readable. The rest of the info (that isn't grant approvals) can go written as is and not be missed by people who skim read. (And I'd wager this info can be more important than grant approvals because it involves actual debated policy)