Glitchracer
Glitchracer t1_jdxha57 wrote
Reply to comment by ColebladeX in [WP] You, a supervillain, are very confused as to why your superhero-nemesis is rampaging through your lair screaming something about you kidnapping their girlfriend. Meanwhile your daughter, who has come to visit you, seems very nervous and is anxious to leave your lair. by Kitty_Fuchs
It would be easier to read if broken up into paragraphs, and a little more attention to punctuation. The werewolf boyfriend aside was great, and I like the idea of a supervillain invested in his daughter’s life. Also that her SO is another girl.
Glitchracer t1_jdxmmzl wrote
Reply to comment by Tahxeol in [WP] You, a supervillain, are very confused as to why your superhero-nemesis is rampaging through your lair screaming something about you kidnapping their girlfriend. Meanwhile your daughter, who has come to visit you, seems very nervous and is anxious to leave your lair. by Kitty_Fuchs
Oh, til. How frustrating