Dead lift plateau is a smart move. At face value, looks as though you’re not overdoing increases so as to allow your muscularskeletal durability of your lower back to improve, which takes longer.

Could also be because your forearms are feeling more taxed with the heavier weight? If that’s the case, Sarcev’s priority principle, where you exercise a given movement when freshest, might be a suggestion. Additional forearm work can also be a big help, with or without grip wraps.

Congrats on the progress so far.

Scratch that—just checked their profile—change DM to OnlyFans subs.

Can someone show the projected number of DMs this person will get in the next 24 hours compared to baseline?

It’s not confusing to the kinds of readers your writing likely gels with. Just saw this comment, and something isn’t right. When a good writer feels the need to explain themselves, they probably don’t need to. If some miss the point, which invariably happens, it means that you respect the intelligence of your audience enough to make them think.

Also bare in mind proper feedback on here is rare, and comments tend to come only when the prompt itself takes off.

I reckon this nails the perfect WP story.

1. ⁠takes the prompt in a creative direction all of its own.

2. ⁠is exceptionally economical and well-written.

3. ⁠resonates for its realness, which realness is so tragic and unexpected that it functions as a kind of inverted twist.

4. ⁠damn.