Submitted by Dostojevskij1205 t3_zwleg3 in books
These are my first real fantasy books. I've been reading more than I ever have after starting AWoK. I'm halfway through Oathbringer now. I love some of the characters, and I was pulled into the plot in a way that I haven't since I was a child. I felt the same excitement that the best of GoT made me feel during the good seasons.
But more and more there are things that annoy me about the books. But small things, the kind of annoyance that might build up at the seemingly innocent personality traits of a good friend after spending too much time together.
The world feels incredibly deep and fleshed out. But at the same time, everything is crem, cremlings and "Storms!". Every description, exclamation and swear. Every simile, metaphor and analogy. It's all explained through these things. Highborn or lowborn. From the south or north, with a few exceptions (I love Rock).
Things are explained again and again. The oathgates will be brought up by a character, and the book will yet again describe what an oathgate is, it's function and how it operates. This happens with everything. Why someone is where they are. The what, why, when and how of this or that plotline. At one point I felt so excited for figuring out a plot point by the hints buried into the story itself. Then it's explained two paragraphs down, plainly in black and white.
Sometimes the writing is fantastic. Dalinar trying to figure out how to navigate himself and his complex moral quandaries in book 1 was incredible. Many of Wit's monologues are insightful and impressive. But it's all buried in hand-holdy narration, which is weird given how complicated the world itself is. And then you'll have Shallan falling into a heap for the 48th time, and Veil explaining the psychology of being Veil instead of her real self, mundanely.
When I talk about The Stormlight Archives with my friend I get excited and impatient to read on. But lately when I've sat down with the books I get increasingly ground down in caring less about the plot, and more about how I don't enjoy the way the book is written.
dexterthekilla t1_j1vti0o wrote
His writing style is extremely simple. So, if you love great prose, he’s not for you.